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JOY 14
Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-02-22 06:00 PM


I heard a pounding
What could it be?
A tapping at my window
On this February day
A sound I haven't heard
In oh so long
It was hard to believe
It was rain
drumming its fingertips
On the glass
A day of odd occurances
Imposters in a winter's gloom
A sunny day of warmth
Reminding me of a day in May
Now rain emerging from clouds above
Adding to puddles of melted snow
Making me smile at
This day of out of place weather!

© Copyright 2000 Kristen Joy Jacobus - All Rights Reserved
rich-pa
Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317
New Orleans, Louisiana
1 posted 2000-02-22 07:37 PM


hey! i dig this! it reminds me of my style at times, you know, dealing with the simple things (like weather) and putting them in a new light.  coolness.

rich-pa

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-22 08:55 PM


Joy, this is perfect...it made me smile...we just had a huge thunderstorm with hail and I was looking at the calendar saying...
"but its suppose to be snowing"...LOL
nice poem! take care janet marie

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
your my inspiration, your my fire...
your words fill me with poetic desire.
Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
Janet Marie
*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


Little_Spyro
Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
3 posted 2000-02-22 09:14 PM


LOL this is great!   We just had a pretty impressive thunderstorm here--rained almost an inch in less than 3 hours!   But we really need it, everything here is so DRY...

Thanks for the meteorological read!  
Hope to see more!

Little Spyro T. Dragon

Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
4 posted 2000-02-23 07:41 PM


Cute poem! We've also had a dry spell that was just broken by some rain....not enough but some....
Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
5 posted 2000-02-26 06:11 PM


Lovely poem Joy. I only wish it would stop raining over here !  
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