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Another Heather Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 93Canada |
Well the days are long and the nights they bring the cold And somewhere in there, the light left your eyes and I don't know what's gone wrong. Sometimes I feel like the sky is falling And sometimes I wonder if my dreams will ever come true Sometimes I wish that I could reach out to you And I don`t know what`s gone wrong. How are you supposed to know how much to give? How are you supposed to know what you should take? How are you supposed to know when to look the other way? How are you supposed to let go....... "The world is never the same once a good poem has been added to it." -Dylan Thomas |
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Little_Spyro Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659San Diego, CA, USA |
Well, sometimes when you don't know What's gone wrong--just let it go; There are things in life that you weren't meant To see, to hear, or to augment. But when to let go? I wish I could show you how I did it one time through... But I cannot, For I have sought That answer, just as you! Beautiful poem, Heather! Beautiful!! Really, what is the answer?  Little Spyro T. Dragon |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
heather, this is a lovely poem of expression and a moment of self doubt that we all can relate to...letting go...or knowing when to...is one of our hearts hardest questions...very nice work... and SPYRO..your reply poem was perfect!! take care...janet marie Now for me some words come easy... But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch. You never knew what I loved in you-- I don't know what you loved in me... Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be... How long have I been sleeping- How long have I been drifting alone through the night... How long have I've dreaming I could make it right... If I closed my eyes and tried with all my might To be the one you need... Jackson Browne |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great poem, Heather. Tough questions....I don't have the answers. To me the answers always seemed to come just when I needed them. Denise |
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Wikket Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340Santa Clara, CA USA |
Sounds like my ex and me last two Augusts ago. I thought he was happy till he told me to go...oh well, you live and learn. Good Questions Heather, maybe we'll all know the answers one day!!!  "I know I should have told you But I was so afraid you'd leave And now there's nothing left to say Well nothing that you'd believe I never meant to hurt you With the things I couldn't say I promise you tomorrow While denying you today..." by Stabbing Westward |
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