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untold sorrow Junior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 12aiea, hawaii, united states |
you simply take my breath away you fuel my passion's fire i see upon the eve of dawn it's you that i desire in my heart with high regards you inspire love's delights my love for you will never end like dark on moonless nights inspiration shining through the clouds like the sun's golden beams the strength of love i feel for you is beyond my wildest dreams your smile gives me happiness your voice stirs memories of the past and deep within your searching heart you hold my wishes cast but i live each day in light of hope that you'll take my point of view that someday, somehow, you'll return the love i feel for you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ahhhhh...they just keep getting better and better... "in my heart with high regards you inspire love's delights my love for you will never end like dark on moonless nights inspiration shining through the clouds like the sun's golden beams the strength of love i feel for you is beyond my wildest dreams"... perfect poetry...  beautiful...janet marie Now for me some words come easy... But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch. You never knew what I loved in you-- I don't know what you loved in me... Maybe the picture of somebody you were hoping I might be... How long have I been sleeping- How long have I been drifting alone through the night... How long have I've dreaming I could make it right... If I closed my eyes and tried with all my might To be the one you need... Jackson Browne |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely poem! I like this very much...it's got a lilt to it..like a song..that's probably why it's called a lullaby!  |
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Another Heather Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 93Canada |
I don`t know about you but I find it incredibly hard to write a rhyming love poem that doesn`t sound completely phony and cheesy, but you managed to accomplish just that; and quite nicely might I add. My favourite aspect is the beautiful choice of words. "I live each day in light of hope" or "You fuel my passion's fire" Great stuff, really. |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Another wonderful poem !  |
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