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untold sorrow
Junior Member

since 2000-02-18

Posts 12
aiea, hawaii, united states

0 posted 2000-02-18 05:30 PM

roses tarnish under the sun
they wither in its heat
their petals slowly float away
and settle at your feet

for it has paid a gift to you
in tribute to your birth
for god had made perfection
the day you graced the earth

he brought you here to steal my heart
and this is what you've done
and now i see no other way
i know that you're the one

i stare at you with loving eyes
i dream of you at night
you've tought me how to love again
and now i see the light

i hope to someday marry you
make you my loving wife
for you have brought the world to me
the start of perfect life

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2000-02-18 05:55 PM

Aw, who could resist something like that? Welcome, untold sorrow!

Elizabeth

"He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-18 08:13 PM

"he brought you here to steal my heart
and this is what you've done
and now i see no other way
i know that you're the one

i stare at you with loving eyes
i dream of you at night
you've tought me how to love again
and now i see the light"

WOW...this is so beautiful...such love filled verses...what a wondeful dedication to a lucky lady...another romantic work of art...
janet marie

Another Heather
Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 93
Canada

3 posted 2000-02-19 06:28 AM

"For god had made perfection the day you graced the earth"

Can't really get any sweeter than that can you? Once again, another great love poem.

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

4 posted 2000-02-19 06:53 AM

I love love poems ! I love this one !

CMGrimm
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 685
USA

5 posted 2000-02-19 10:16 AM

Very wonderful untold sorrow....just simply wonderful...looking forward to reading more of your work in the future.

Chris

Never be a carbon copy of anybody...make your own impressions. - ANON.

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