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untold sorrow
Junior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 12
aiea, hawaii, united states

0 posted 2000-02-18 05:09 PM



when mountains rise and valleys part
and you are out of view
i promise that this lonely heart
goes on beating for you

when darkness falls and night has come
and twinkling starts rejoice
though even in this silent birth
i still will here your voice

when hell is hot and ruling
and fire burns the ground
i promise that no matter what
that i shall stick around


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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-18 08:08 PM


perfect!! a sweet poem of undying dedication... another very nice sample of work
janet marie

 "Bring it on baby what you getting into...
I swear at once it was the little things that mattered--
But it all seems true to you.
Say the hell with my name and say the hell with my picture...
but swear, for the one time you need me around.
And here I'll stand like it matters...
Only once love gets through then gets scattered by the rain...
But pain gives me the right to be unkind"...
Tabitha's Secret


Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
2 posted 2000-02-19 06:42 AM


What a beautiful "no matter what...I'll be there" poem  
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