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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN 
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This a poem me and my friend Lorena wrote.We both are suffering from broken hearts so we decided to write something together.This goes out to two guyz Adrion and Ramon.i hope you all like it its the first time i ever did anything with another person.please give us your honest opinions.thanx  My love for you is so real so what the hell is the deal. You say you love me. And you tell me that you want me to stay. Are those just words that you say? I dont want to play your games anymore. If you love me be for real. If you doubt let me know. Don't you know this hurts me so? I need you to hold. I want you to care. Tell me is this really love we share? Is your heart even there? You mean the world. You melt my heart. What do you get out of tearing me apart? How many times do i have to say i love you before you understand? Sometimes i feel it's just your excuse. You have no right to accuse! I love you and no one else. I have told you many times. Why cant you see my love is true? There is no me without you! Adrion and Ramon we love you! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
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Love can surely hurt. A sad fact of life. If this is the way these guys are treating you, you best move in....you'll be glad you did. I am speaking from experience. Save yourselves from more heartache and find someone who will treat you right because they really do love you! Denise |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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this is very good...well expressed emotions..you two make a good team..and its great to have the support of a good friend... love teaches us hard lessons...and helps us to create our poetry...make sure the ones who are on the receiving end are deserving of both your talented words and your gifts of devotion. take care, janet marie "Bring it on baby what you getting into... I swear at once it was the little things that mattered-- But it all seems true to you. Say the hell with my name and say the hell with my picture... but swear, for the one time you need me around. And here I'll stand like it matters... Only once love gets through then gets scattered by the rain... But pain gives me the right to be unkind"... Tabitha's Secret |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
THANK YOU BOTH FOR HE ADVICE. IM TRYIN TO MOVE ON BUT ITS HARD BECAUSE I STILL LOVE HIM MORE THEN LIFE. |
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