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Another Heather
Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 93
Canada

0 posted 2000-02-17 03:55 AM

Well as you can see i`m new on this site. I`m looking for feedback/criticisms for some poetry, so if you have time please check them out. questions welcome.

I`m looking forward to reading some more from all of you too. the stuff i`ve read already is great!

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-02-17 09:26 AM

Welcome to Passions, Heather! It's nice to have you here! If you are looking for serious, in-depth criticism, you can post your poems in the Critical Analysis Forum. I can give you input on minor things but the folks in CA are much more knowledgable on the finer points of poetry!

Denise

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

2 posted 2000-02-17 03:07 PM

Welcome Heather! Where's your poetry? I can't wait to read it! I'm sure you will like it here.

Joy

Gather ye rosebuds while ye may,
Old time is still a-flying,
And this same flower that smiles today
To-morrow will be dying.

-Robert Herrick

Munda
Member Elite

since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

3 posted 2000-02-17 06:09 PM

I have to agree with Denise

There are only great people in CA for advise on your poetry. Check it out

And welcome to the Pub once again

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