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just_another_fe
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since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN

0 posted 2000-02-16 02:44 PM



I had a friend
that I thought was real.
I loved the way
he made me feel.
When he was around
my face would glow.
My real feelings
I tried not to show.
I trusted him
and let my guard down.
A heart to break
is what he found.
I heard what he said.
He did't think i knew.
He did't seem to care
that our "friendship" was through.
When i cried
he just laughed.
Would this pain
never pass?
He was a "friend"
That I thought I knew.
"POOKIE"
This broken heart
is the works of you.

   I got you back as "sir" but i miss my "pookie"  


[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 02-16-2000).]

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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-02-16 10:45 PM


Love can be a complicated, painful affair. Very sad poem.

Denise

Another Heather
Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 93
Canada
2 posted 2000-02-17 03:34 AM


Boy, do I hear you.
I`m new on this site and it`s helpful to see poems like yours as I realize many people turn to writing to express these sort of emotions.
Sounds like it turned out ok though!  

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-02-17 12:23 PM


very sweet and sad poem...well expressed! I really like the impact of the last line..very good work,take care janet marie

 When you look in the mirror...
Wish you were somebody else
Just a perfect reflection
You and no one else...
Minutes run into hours
Hours run into days
You're still waiting for someone
Who never ever came...
Go and run through the hallways
Find your way to the door
You will end up like always
Back where you were before...
Then you look in the mirror
Wish you were somebody else
But it's still your reflection
You and no one else...
Guster


jascanvey
Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130
England
4 posted 2000-02-17 05:22 PM


Angie - feel like you wrote this for me!!
Good piece of work, I liked it!!

Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
5 posted 2000-02-17 05:42 PM


You expressed yourself very well here !  
just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
6 posted 2000-02-18 02:49 AM


denise: love is vey difficult and for me mostly painful.thank you

heather: thanxs everything i write is about how i feel or some how related to my feelings. welcome to passions

janet: thanxs a lot  

julie: well i was thinkin bout ya lol. did u call?????? *dies from curiosity*

munda: thanx  


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