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Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

0 posted 2000-02-09 04:14 PM



Without You I Can Not Live

To live my life without you
seems an impossible thing
When I softly touch you
I can almost hear you sing
You love my sweet talking
running through your heart
And when I sometimes scold you
you feel like falling apart
I hate when you give up on me
it feels like letting me down
Take your time to do the job
makes me seriously frown
How can I stay mad at you
you give me the world to see
After cigarettes and coffee
you’re addiction number three
Passions, tears and friendship,
everything I ask you give
No, my dear computer
without you I can not live


Munda      

© Copyright 2000 Munda - All Rights Reserved
just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
1 posted 2000-02-09 04:32 PM


you had me thing you were talking about a guy. lol good job

[This message has been edited by just_another_fe (edited 02-09-2000).]

jascanvey
Member
since 1999-12-26
Posts 130
England
2 posted 2000-02-09 04:37 PM


Okay, you got me there! Excellent!
Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
3 posted 2000-02-09 04:39 PM


LOL   Sneaky, you sucked me in. I like the twist ending.    Only I'm not so fond of my computer, I'm constantly cursing at it.

Good one.

~Gene

Wikket
Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA
4 posted 2000-02-09 09:09 PM


Hehehe...Munda!  You're so silly, but I agree with you.  Sometimes the beast of the 'puter is my lifeline too.  For a long time, I felt I deserved nothing better in life.  Don't worry, I've been thru the addiction list and it's funny that I gave up the cigarettes yet it only made me go to the coffee pot even more.  Darn those stimulants!  


 "...at night I cling to you I'm so afraid;
afraid the day will come
and I'll wake up and find you gone.
But you promise that you'd not abandon me
and kissed my fears away
but I woke up to that day..."
'Waking up Beside You' by Stabbing Westward

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

5 posted 2000-02-10 12:35 PM


Munda....I LOVE THIS POEM!!!
ya made me smile...Im so glad to know Im not the only one needing computer rehab...after too long of time away...I get the shakes..LOL
...I dont drink coffee and I dont smoke..so Im allowed one vice right?  
take care, janet marie

 ...baby, dont you work so hard for this prize you found...
it will all be gone when you turn around...
cause ... nothin' lasts forever anyway...
Rick Roberts-Windmills


Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

6 posted 2000-02-10 09:50 PM


Thanks for the chuckles, Munda! You got me, too, on this one!  

I am having problems with my computer, probably my server.....it is taking me about 5 minutes to open and load a thread (or any pages at Passions for that matter)   I'll have to call them tomorrow...this is the third day that I can't read and respond to everything....I did do the disk cleanup and defrag, but it didn't help....So just in case anybody was wondering what happened to me...I'm still here....just can't do anything in a timely manner. I hope I get this straightened out soon.....'cause I am addicted to Passions.....

(sorry for leaving this message here, Munda, but I don't know if I'll be able to open another thread before I fall asleep...hehe)

Little_Spyro
Senior Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 659
San Diego, CA, USA
7 posted 2000-02-10 11:44 PM


ROFLMTO!!!! (T = tail)

This is GREAT, Munda! You have GOT to tell me whre you get these ideas!!!!

I wish I could write like this...
*bursts out laughing*  


Little Spyro T. Dragon

Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
8 posted 2000-02-11 05:55 PM


Thanks guys, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Hope your troubles are over real soon Denise. We miss you here !
Sam, I do NOT know where I get these ideas. It must be the Dutch double salt liquorice doing this to my brain !   But honestly, I hardly ever know what I am going to write about. I start something because of a feeling I have and try to catch it on paper, but hardly ever know how it will end. I know, sounds weird, but you know what ? I AM weird !  

Thank you all, you wonderful people, for your kind words.  

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
9 posted 2000-05-05 04:22 AM


*chuckles*  Very very good.  

 To oppose you is to deny the heart of friendship... To join you is to deny the heart of humanity. I am the earth... the fire... you are the sea and wind. Should we together be god? Or apart be nemesis...


Yu Lan
Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462
New Zealand
10 posted 2000-05-05 06:11 AM


hehe, I thought it was about a guy.. but this is brilliant.. u have such great ideas Munda! lol.. well, I don't smoke, and I hate coffee.. oh boy, does that mean computers are my number one addiction?! ^_^ Yikes! hehehe..

Aah, chuckles!! ^_^

Yeah, but aren't all the best ppl weird?! ^_^ Oh, I am a little biased here, I believe I do fall into that cateogory myself  

Lynne

Dennis L. White
Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.
11 posted 2000-05-05 06:53 AM


Munda,
  Am I easy or what, You got me from the get-go! :^( This was great! Write on!
                          Dennis :^)

Honeybee
Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA
12 posted 2000-05-05 01:25 PM


~Munda~

     Count me in, you got me there too. I didn't expect the twist at the end. I am a slave to my computer now too.  
                 
Thanks for the laugh  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee



John the cat
Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 357
England
13 posted 2000-05-05 03:30 PM


Love it Munda. Thanks for the laugh.

 May your roof never fall in and those beneath it never fall out.

Irish proverb.

tom
Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 90
s/w penna u.s.a.
14 posted 2000-05-05 04:08 PM


Munda
I hear ya loud and clear. Good one.

  tom

 sticks and stones may break my bones,only if you hit me.

Jon Mewett
Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304

15 posted 2000-05-05 04:35 PM


Hey Munda better watch yourself things are getting serious

££^&*()_{ ><>
Damn Computer

Jon

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