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Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554


0 posted 2000-02-01 01:28 AM


~Loves Sanctuary~


Your Love is like a sanctuary...
keeping me safe, keeping me alive.
With in the embrace of your heart-
I finally breathe and survive.

You came into my life like a whisper...
a beautiful secret that needed to be told.
Completing me with ecstasy,
releasing me from loneliness, so dark and cold.

Entwining loving arms of trust around me,
Enticing me with sweet mystical devotion.
Overcome by the desperation of our need,
Surrendering to the intensity of our emotions.

Your love is my sanctuary,
My most precious possesion.
I exsist purely for these moments...
and the gifts of your hearts expressions.

Janet Marie


 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



© Copyright 2000 Janet Marie - All Rights Reserved
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-02-01 09:26 AM


So beautiful, Janet Marie! A beautiful love poem!  
Denise

Gene
Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935
Colorado, USA
2 posted 2000-02-01 12:04 PM


Yeah, I agree, but which one are you talking about, Denise?  I think Janet Marie's signature is equally as good.  

~Gene

Ziggi
New Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 1

3 posted 2000-02-01 12:53 PM


This is my first time here and your poem is the first I read and it sounds like sweet music to my ears. Love poetry is one of my favorite and Janet Marie that was beautiful.
Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
4 posted 2000-02-01 01:51 PM


You got a point Gene, they are both very beautiful    
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

5 posted 2000-02-01 03:57 PM


Ziggi..hello and welcome to Passions... I'm so very honored my poem was your first you will love it here, everyone is SO NICE...
thanks to ALL of you who commented on my poem and my signature...they were both inspired by the same amazing man... sweet inspiration...I am grateful for it everyday...take care,janet marie

 Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme,
They are not measured by the commitment of time.
Some emotions run too deep to be described by words,
Forgiveness and understanding-
remain the most beautiful words ever heard.
Janet Marie



Exile
Junior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 42

6 posted 2000-02-01 08:05 PM


Well, I'M not nice! I'm a cantankerous old man! And I hate love poems!!!

No...I can't say that even in jest. It was such a touching poem, JM, and it makes me want to be in love again. This one belongs in a song...or one of those expensive greeting cards.

Exile

Wikket
Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 340
Santa Clara, CA USA
7 posted 2000-02-02 07:43 PM


*sniff*  you don't know how much I want that very secure kind of love... *sigh* One day it will be mine, o yes!  --Jamie  

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
8 posted 2000-04-14 06:03 AM


Brings a smile to my face.. Strosek, I hope you get to see this too..

 MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU,
MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK
MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE
THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS
AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN,
MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND

Irish Blessing

Strosek
Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61
Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa
9 posted 2000-04-14 06:08 AM


Great poem makes me think of hopeful times to come in my life.

 May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights.


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