WELCOME Wikket... you gonna love it here...everyone is so supportive and great...AND talented...you will fit right in...this poem is very nice...very good!!!!!!!! take care, janet marie
Some things cannot be explained by verses that rhyme, They are not measured by the commitment of time. Some emotions run too deep to be described by words, Forgiveness and understanding- remain the most beautiful words ever heard. Janet Marie
Wow wikket. Yay! loved it! I am so glad you're here. -wen
"I am everything you want I am everything you need. I am everything inside of you That you wish you could be I say all the right things At exactly the right time But I mean nothing to you And I don't know why." -"Everything You Want" Vertical Horizon
The Hague, The Netherlands
This is good! I like it! Welcome to the zcorner Pub, Wikket
Probably only one thing though.. u repeated "..around me" in the first stanza.. and .. well it takes a little of the magic away.. hehe.. I did that in one of my poems too.. repeated "around her".. and, really there are better words, eh Wikket? ^_^ Not to say it is BAD to do that.. of course not..
Anyway, I will read more of your poetry.. I like this..