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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
The last poem I write Before falls the night I want to remember in my dreams Sunshine That falls on my shoulders And warms the summer loon's back Running through fields barefoot and carefree Let the rain of tranquility pour down on my face And sprinkle my cheeks! Oh, let my last poem be lasting Into the cold winter darkness Awaiting summer's splendors I'll impatiently sit Writing fridgedly in the wrath of the season Let this be the last poem I write Before falls the calling night! JOY |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Joy~I hope it's not the last poem you EVER write! Beautiful work here. Glad I'm not alone in the pub here. Bartender! Another round!  "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York." |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Joy, this is beautiful! Simply beautiful! Thanks for posting it here! Denise |
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lily Junior Member
since 1999-12-27
Posts 16united states |
this is great poem. there is a lot of intensity and a sort of old romantic feeling to it. i enjoyed it thanks for the read |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I think this is a beautiful ideal and so well written. ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I am with Elizabeth. . . don't let this be the last one. . . This poem is simply wonderful. . . I love the words and the imagery that you show. . . I can almost feel the warmth and the sprinkles. . . Wonderful. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Don't worry! This will NOT be the last poem I write. I was saying it would be the last poem I write before the day ends! Thank you all for your compliments to my poem! JOY |
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Fairy Colours Member
since 1999-12-02
Posts 169Sunrise,Fl,US |
*sighs in relief* We would have lost an incredible poet. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Thanks Fairy!  I'm smiling wide now!JOY |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I enjoy most poems, but especially like ones about sunshine... shine on, Joy! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
I'm glad this wasn't the last one you wrote.. Very well done.. MAY THE ROAD RISE TO MEET YOU, MAY THE WIND BE ALWAYS AT YOUR BACK MAY THE SUN SHINE UPON YOUR FACE THE RAINS FALL SOFT UPON YOUR FIELDS AND, UNTIL WE MEET AGAIN, MAY GOD HOLD YOU IN THE PALM OF HIS HAND Irish Blessing |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Hi! Wow! I've been wandering in and out of the Pub, busy with school. And I came lately to see a whole bunch of my poems in the last day pages. Wrote these it seems to be so long ago. It's nice to see them all again, like old friends. A lot of Little Spyro's are here too. When is that little dragon commin' back? I miss him! Thanks Broken Winged Angel. You're the one replying to 'em all. And being too too kind!  Bye. Joy |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
Very nice poem Joy are you from the Great White North and long winter nights? thanx Angel...have to go digging sometimes. Jack |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Oh, wait! Silly me. I must be blind because I see Spyro is back! Welcome, welcome back. |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
Glad this isn't the last poem you ever wrote, I love your poetry! I know this is well out of date but I just had to say I love it! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
A lovely poem, Joy .... filled with wonderful imagery .... "This is where you will win the battle .... in the playhouse of your mind." Maxwell Maltz |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Jack~you could say that. I'm from Wisconsin. Where you can experience 4 seasons in on month, like now. 70 degrees on Friday, today a forcast of snow. Lizzie~Thanks. I always appreciate compliments for fresh or burried poems! Pepper~Thanks to you too. Imagery was what I was going for in this one. Glad you enjoyed! thanks, thanks, thanks Joy |
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rich-pa Member
since 2000-02-07
Posts 317New Orleans, Louisiana |
as an ardent fan of nature in general i must say that i absolutely loved this piece because of it's descriptions. i also enjoyed the message, keep up the good work, yo rich-pa "freedom is just another word for nothing left to lose..." -janis joplin |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Marvelous job on this poem, I love it, glad BWA brought it back. |
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