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Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

0 posted 1999-12-06 02:19 PM


The note rises soft and sweet
my pulse performs a triple beat,
shivers racing through my spine,
angelic fingers close to mine.

With subtle grace and purity
still she presses close to me,
her face a mask of freshness pure:
coy and catlike; soft, demure.

I stand mute beside this one,
even after the song is done.
Her soul emits a peaceful tone
from every fiber, every bone.

Eyes closed in rapturous delight
her lips trembling ever so slight,
hands leave their resting place.
I stare into angelic face.

A final song, the place empty,
this angel turns her face to me
and hand-in-hand we take our leave,
and I once more in love believe.

Alicat the persnikitty
7-31-92


 As I sit here dimly thinking
Watching modem lights a-blinking
Churning out poetic hash.
Lord, in all Your piety,
Help me keep my sanity:
Please don't let the modem crash! --Alicat


© Copyright 1999 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
Nicole
Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
1 posted 1999-12-06 02:26 PM


Very nice sug, paints a picture in my head, it does.  

(lol@your signature!)

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown

Isis
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
2 posted 1999-12-06 07:51 PM


Songs and music nothing sweeter to the ear, loved the imagery and magic in this one.......  suppose it's the diehard singer in me  


 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)


Pepper
Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
3 posted 1999-12-07 07:21 PM


This is wonderful Alicat!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!



Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-12-07 09:07 PM


This is beautiful! Love at its best!

 Denise



Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

5 posted 1999-12-10 06:48 AM


A true romantic song.
Wonderful.

Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505
Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
6 posted 1999-12-12 09:22 PM


Why, Alicat, you old romantic!!!
Munda
Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
7 posted 2000-03-05 03:54 AM


deVine is gonna love me.....Alicat's gonna hate me !

But honestly Sir.....this is way too good to be stucked away under the bar !
Here's a hanky, quit crying and write.....write.....write for us ! Please ?

[This message has been edited by Munda (edited 03-05-2000).]

childomine
Senior Member
since 2000-01-25
Posts 818
st. petersburg, FL
8 posted 2000-03-05 09:38 AM


Alicat this is my favorite one of yours so far.  Romantic with tones of sensuality.
Sasikat
Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 290
St. Petersburg, FL
9 posted 2000-03-05 12:08 PM


Alicat -

A love song to sing out strong!!  This is beautiful and so full of love.  Always believe in love for when it is REAL, it will never fail you.

Sheila

TexUS
Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228

10 posted 2005-01-15 09:21 PM


'Tis a delightful tune, very pretty indeed!

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