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The Song

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Alicat
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since 05-23-99
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0 posted 12-06-1999 02:19 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alicat

The note rises soft and sweet
my pulse performs a triple beat,
shivers racing through my spine,
angelic fingers close to mine.

With subtle grace and purity
still she presses close to me,
her face a mask of freshness pure:
coy and catlike; soft, demure.

I stand mute beside this one,
even after the song is done.
Her soul emits a peaceful tone
from every fiber, every bone.

Eyes closed in rapturous delight
her lips trembling ever so slight,
hands leave their resting place.
I stare into angelic face.

A final song, the place empty,
this angel turns her face to me
and hand-in-hand we take our leave,
and I once more in love believe.

Alicat the persnikitty
7-31-92


 As I sit here dimly thinking
Watching modem lights a-blinking
Churning out poetic hash.
Lord, in all Your piety,
Help me keep my sanity:
Please don't let the modem crash! --Alicat

© Copyright 1999 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
Nicole
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since 06-23-99
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1 posted 12-06-1999 02:26 PM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Very nice sug, paints a picture in my head, it does.  

(lol@your signature!)

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

--Author Unknown
Isis
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2 posted 12-06-1999 07:51 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

Songs and music nothing sweeter to the ear, loved the imagery and magic in this one.......  suppose it's the diehard singer in me  


 The more you praise and celebrate your life, the more there IS to celebrate.
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

Pepper
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since 08-19-99
Posts 3134
Southern Florida

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3 posted 12-07-1999 07:21 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

This is wonderful Alicat!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


Denise
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4 posted 12-07-1999 09:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful! Love at its best!

 Denise


Severn
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5 posted 12-10-1999 06:48 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

A true romantic song.
Wonderful.
Balladeer
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6 posted 12-12-1999 09:22 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Why, Alicat, you old romantic!!!
Munda
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since 10-08-1999
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The Hague, The Netherlands


7 posted 03-05-2000 03:54 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

deVine is gonna love me.....Alicat's gonna hate me !

But honestly Sir.....this is way too good to be stucked away under the bar !
Here's a hanky, quit crying and write.....write.....write for us ! Please ?

[This message has been edited by Munda (edited 03-05-2000).]
childomine
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since 01-25-2000
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8 posted 03-05-2000 09:38 AM       View Profile for childomine   Email childomine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for childomine

Alicat this is my favorite one of yours so far.  Romantic with tones of sensuality.
Sasikat
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9 posted 03-05-2000 12:08 PM       View Profile for Sasikat   Email Sasikat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sasikat

Alicat -

A love song to sing out strong!!  This is beautiful and so full of love.  Always believe in love for when it is REAL, it will never fail you.

Sheila
TexUS
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10 posted 01-15-2005 09:21 PM       View Profile for TexUS   Email TexUS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TexUS

'Tis a delightful tune, very pretty indeed!
 
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