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OLIAS
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0 posted 12-19-2013 10:27 PM       View Profile for OLIAS   Email OLIAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for OLIAS

Winter Walking
                                                  

I walked the line of ermine,
alive with drifting snow,
crystal evanescence
prismatic in the glow,
waning winter sunset
painting pine and fir,
diamonds cast asunder
dancing in the air.

Ahead I saw a cabin,
adorned in hunter green,
ivory and crimson
hung from bough and beam,
and through each lighted portal
rang tidings of good cheer,
triumphantly announcing
the saviors day is near.

Is this heaven?

shoeless Joe Jackson.

© Copyright 2013 Mick Yates - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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Eternity


1 posted 12-22-2013 05:13 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Dear Olias,
I am so happy to have discovered your wonderful winter poem. You really caught the magical atmosphere.
I know you posted this in the right place, but I fear few pipsters get ever in here.
Hopefully some others will read this and enjoy it as I did.
Merry Christmas!

Love and peace.
Margherita
OLIAS
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2 posted 12-22-2013 07:39 PM       View Profile for OLIAS   Email OLIAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OLIAS

Thank you for your kind reply,  all the very best to you for the holidays and the new year.

Is this heaven?

shoeless Joe Jackson.

Prasad Nataraj
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this could well be put to music, very rhythmic. Fine writing. Enjoyed! Happy Holidays to you too.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 01-30-2000
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


4 posted 12-24-2013 02:18 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

When winter opens its heart to go hand in hand with the festive season, a walk in the fresh snow always brings a warmth of Christmas Magic

Enjoyed
Rex

     

OLIAS
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5 posted 12-24-2013 10:51 PM       View Profile for OLIAS   Email OLIAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OLIAS

Prasad, thanks for your kind comment, much appreciated.

Rex  thanks for the comment and the sentiments very cool thank you
Happy Holidays to you both

Is this heaven?

shoeless Joe Jackson.

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 01-09-2014 05:50 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

What a wonderful poem. This will remain among my favorites
Liz
 
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