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OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

0 posted 2013-12-19 10:27 PM

Winter Walking

I walked the line of ermine,
alive with drifting snow,
crystal evanescence
prismatic in the glow,
waning winter sunset
painting pine and fir,
diamonds cast asunder
dancing in the air.

Ahead I saw a cabin,
adorned in hunter green,
ivory and crimson
hung from bough and beam,
and through each lighted portal
rang tidings of good cheer,
triumphantly announcing
the saviors day is near.

Is this heaven?

shoeless Joe Jackson.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2013-12-22 05:13 AM

Dear Olias,
I am so happy to have discovered your wonderful winter poem. You really caught the magical atmosphere.
I know you posted this in the right place, but I fear few pipsters get ever in here.
Hopefully some others will read this and enjoy it as I did.
Merry Christmas!

Love and peace.

Margherita

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

2 posted 2013-12-22 07:39 PM

Thank you for your kind reply, all the very best to you for the holidays and the new year.

Is this heaven?

shoeless Joe Jackson.

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

3 posted 2013-12-24 11:02 AM

this could well be put to music, very rhythmic. Fine writing. Enjoyed! Happy Holidays to you too.

"The secret behind survival of mankind is kindness and love within our hearts"
prasadnatarajan5.blogspot.com/

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

4 posted 2013-12-24 02:18 PM

When winter opens its heart to go hand in hand with the festive season, a walk in the fresh snow always brings a warmth of Christmas Magic

Enjoyed
Rex

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

5 posted 2013-12-24 10:51 PM

Prasad, thanks for your kind comment, much appreciated.

Rex thanks for the comment and the sentiments very cool thank you
Happy Holidays to you both

Is this heaven?

shoeless Joe Jackson.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

6 posted 2014-01-09 05:50 AM

What a wonderful poem. This will remain among my favorites
Liz

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