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Love and Hearts and flowers

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0 posted 02-12-2011 05:21 PM       View Profile for kjsd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kjsd

When i saw you i knew you were for me
I got a dozzen roses with a note that said plese love me
Than i got you a bunch of candy heats that all said be mine
Than i gave you love
When we went on our first date it was valintines day
So again i agot a dozzen roses with a bunch of candy harts that all said be mine for the note
than you gave me your love

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What a sweet Valentine's day poem.  I noticed you don't mind mild critique - so if you are giving this away, you may wish to correct all the spelling errors    

When i saw you i knew you were for me
I got a dozzen roses with a note that said plese love me
Than i got you a bunch of candy heats that all said be mine
Than i gave you love
When we went on our first date it was valintines day
So again i agot a dozzen roses with a bunch of candy harts that all said be mine for the note
than you gave me your love

Have a great Valentine's Day ♥
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