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my not so good time on valintines

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kjsd
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0 posted 01-23-2010 10:41 AM       View Profile for kjsd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kjsd


MY NOT SO GOOD TIME ON VALINTINES


dont get me wrong it is a nice holiday for you
but for me it tells me all day he is gone
i hope he could give me some flowers or even a kiss would be good  
but he is goe no why to tell me he is ok and that he loves me
untill last valintines day
we built a new stadem for the football team
he would have loved it he was the star of the team
he was there when it was being bulit and did something nobody eles would do
he palnted some flowers on the green that said

I LOVE U

that is the last time i will see it for when football seasone comes they will die

based on the book dont die my love
© Copyright 2010 kailyn johnson - All Rights Reserved
KatVern17
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1 posted 02-01-2010 09:20 PM       View Profile for KatVern17   Email KatVern17   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for KatVern17

Personally I think Valintines is overrated. You don't need one day to celebrate your love to someone, when you should already do that the other 364 days.

kjsd
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i think that too
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3 posted 03-04-2010 01:02 PM       View Profile for qwertyportne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for qwertyportne

Yes, Valentines Day can bring both pleasant and unpleasant feelings.  Despite the unpleasant feelings in your poem, however, I enjoyed the story it conveyed.  What a thoughtful thing to do -- plant flowers with a message!  I'll post one I wrote many years ago for my late wife. She is gone, too, but I still have the poem, and her, in my heart.  And believe she took it, and me, with her when she left...

--Bill
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