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Dearest Santa

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greeneggs-n-ham
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0 posted 12-15-2007 01:28 PM       View Profile for greeneggs-n-ham   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for greeneggs-n-ham


I wrote this last night, and i thought it was kind of cute, so i decided to post it. Its not great, but with what i've been writing lately, its not too bad.(im in a writers slump)
What do you think?

Dearest Santa

Dearest Santa,
This year Ive been good
Ive said thank you
Just like I should

I havent shouted
Havent cried
...maybe a little
But I havent lied!

I walked my dog
I combed my hair
I even wore
Clean underwear

Im not the one
Who started that fight
I gave my sister
A hug last night

I said sorry
For kicking her
But you saw that
Im pretty sure

I turned in my work
And all on time
On mothers day I wrote
A cute little rhyme

Ive been patient
Been a good friend
In every line
I was the end

I listened to
My mom and dad
Im on the good list
Ive not been bad

I guess what Im
Trying to say
Ive a request
For Christmas day

When I go downstairs
After youve come
The cookies we left you
Can you save me one?

comments and critics appreciated

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1 posted 12-15-2007 06:49 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

Merry Christmas !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ARCTIC WIND
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2 posted 12-17-2007 12:26 PM       View Profile for fromme2U   Email fromme2U   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for fromme2U

aw this was too cute!
 
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