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Valentines(not intended to be sad)

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Thebaer
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0 posted 03-20-2007 09:30 PM       View Profile for Thebaer   Email Thebaer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Thebaer

I see rose hips dotting my school hallways
The reconstructed sums given in love
But now only remnants left in way
This holiday brings me no sadness
Only neutralism and memories I care to leave behind
The latter of which I would care to complete
Rather than receive anything of loving feat.

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dollmaker
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1 posted 02-05-2008 02:55 PM       View Profile for dollmaker   Email dollmaker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dollmaker

lovely but it is sad.. nice work. great images.
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GothicCherry
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2 posted 11-26-2008 01:06 AM       View Profile for GothicCherry   Email GothicCherry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GothicCherry

Emotional-yes. Sad-not so much. I enjoyed it.
 
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