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latteaddict213
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0 posted 02-22-2006 07:00 PM       View Profile for latteaddict213   Email latteaddict213   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for latteaddict213


You search for eggs hidden among the plants.
You spot one.
You race forward to claim your prize.
You snatch it, smiling ear to ear.
You gently place it among the rest in your basket.
You look down trying to quickly count how many eggs there are.
You say around twelve.
The buzzer sounds.
You rush back to the main picnic table handing your  basket to the judge.
She counts them then gives them back to you smiling sweetly and saying, there are fifteen sweet heart.
You hate when people call you that so you stomp off to your seat and await for the results.
Some girl with a frilly dress got the place you had three years ago, third place.
A young man got second place, you had it four years ago.
A boy with plaid overalls got the runner up spot, you had that last year.
Then the judge that called you sweet heart got up on stage and said, the winner of the anual Easter Egg Hunt is..., she waited biulding up the suspence. The winner is, she called your name.
You have finaly won the prize you have been trying so hard to get for years.
You walk onto the stage beaming. You parents looking so proud.
The judge hands you the prize and you also recieve a blue ribbon.
When you get back home you call all you friends and tell them the news.
After your parents kiss you good night you say to yourself, this was the BEST Easter ever.   

            Jessica    
              :)

       Where your heart lays
        is where you belong.

© Copyright 2006 Jessica - All Rights Reserved
latteaddict213
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1 posted 02-22-2006 07:53 PM       View Profile for latteaddict213   Email latteaddict213   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latteaddict213

Ummm this was just for fun, but I really would like some kind of responce please?

            Jessica    
              :)

       Where your heart lays
        is where you belong.

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2 posted 03-07-2006 05:21 AM       View Profile for Free_Spirit07   Email Free_Spirit07   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Free_Spirit07

I think that you should change ..."You look down trying to quickly count how many eggs there are."... to "You look down trying to quickly count how many eggs ARE THERE." ....... just maybe i dunno it just sounded better - over all ... *thumbs up*

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~%#*So far from life and living!*#%~

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3 posted 03-07-2006 09:15 AM       View Profile for latteaddict213   Email latteaddict213   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latteaddict213

thanks. i would change it but you can only edit you post 24 hours after its written not more

           Jessica    
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

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4 posted 03-07-2006 04:05 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

It was a fun story to read. It would be nice for kids to read around Easter.

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

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5 posted 03-07-2006 05:25 PM       View Profile for latteaddict213   Email latteaddict213   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latteaddict213

yeah. maybe. thanx

           Jessica    
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

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6 posted 03-23-2006 03:52 PM       View Profile for ShelbyLynn13   Email ShelbyLynn13   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ShelbyLynn13

wow, jess, i always thought that you were a good writer but i would have never thought yoou had an imagination that big!

every one is special in their own  way!!!

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7 posted 06-27-2006 11:25 AM       View Profile for latteaddict213   Email latteaddict213   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latteaddict213

Uhhh. Thanks. I think.
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