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0 posted 2006-02-20 08:48 PM



Its Christmas Eve.
The house is excited.
Every ones bouncing off the walls.
You leave some cookies for the jolly old man.
Your head hits the bed, you fall asleep instantly.
Your head fills with all the nice things you've done this year, all the good gifts you've given and the hearts you've filled with joy.


You wake up early the next morning.
You see all the gifts around the tree.
You run and open your first gift.
Then you're content.
You rush up stairs and wake your parents.
They act like little kids running down the stairs.
Their faces filled with joy as they examine your new toys.


Later that day its time for dinner and all the family comes over.
They all pile in to your dinning room sitting down looking hungry chating noicily.
In comes the big ham delicious looking.
After the feast you say goodbye to you relatives and climb into bed, dreaming about what will happen next year.

  wrote this just 4 fun would love to hear the feed back


Where your heart lays is where you belong.

© Copyright 2006 Jessica - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-02-20 09:05 PM


Any imput on this?
Maybe I should have writen it in a folder that people actually look into

                  
              Jessica


Where your heart lays is where you belong.

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2 posted 2006-03-07 05:24 AM


yeah this is good - how is it to have family around for christmas??? MAN do i wish mine to be there.....and anyways back to reality (if thats how you spell it)

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3 posted 2006-03-07 09:16 AM


yeah it is. thank you.

           Jessica    
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4 posted 2006-03-23 03:59 PM


ya.. how is it to have family that actualy like each other around for christmas? i would never know! great write do more!

every one is special in their own  way!!!

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5 posted 2006-06-27 11:26 AM


Oh. Yeah. Sorry.
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