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Valentines day you are so far away yet you have just passed by.You bring sweet memories that have fallen to the back of the mind, you bring them up to the front. And you take with you the bad
memories that made them fell hurt. You make us forget all the horrible things in life and remember the great ones

tell me some imput I'll be happy to hear all
                    
                   Jessica


Where your heart lays is where you belong.

[This message has been edited by latteaddict213 (02-20-2006 09:11 PM).]

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1 posted 02-20-2006 09:13 PM       View Profile for latteaddict213   Email latteaddict213   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latteaddict213

Hello.. any one out there?
  i know the poem isn't great but i would like some feed back

      
         please
            Jessica
              


Where your heart lays is where you belong.
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2 posted 03-07-2006 05:26 AM       View Profile for Free_Spirit07   Email Free_Spirit07   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Free_Spirit07

Love this line.....got me thinking:

"Valentines day you are so far away yet you have just passed by."

even if it don't make sence ... it does.... :P

x0x0
Free_Spirit07    
~%#*So far from perfect!*#%~
~%#*So far from life and living!*#%~

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3 posted 03-07-2006 09:18 AM       View Profile for latteaddict213   Email latteaddict213   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latteaddict213

thank you. i love hearing from you. its always a joy.

           Jessica    
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

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4 posted 03-07-2006 04:02 PM       View Profile for skyshine   Email skyshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit skyshine's Home Page   View IP for skyshine

I like the line that Free Spirit pointed out, too.

~sky

I hope someday you get the chance to live like you were dying....
~Tim McGraw

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5 posted 03-07-2006 05:24 PM       View Profile for latteaddict213   Email latteaddict213   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latteaddict213

thank you

           Jessica    
              :)
    Character is what you
      do when you think that
         no one is loking--??

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6 posted 03-23-2006 03:55 PM       View Profile for ShelbyLynn13   Email ShelbyLynn13   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ShelbyLynn13

mot bad but i kind of wish you would have made it a little longer, because it leaves you wanting more!!

every one is special in their own  way!!!

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7 posted 06-27-2006 11:28 AM       View Profile for latteaddict213   Email latteaddict213   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latteaddict213

Oh. Well Thanks.
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