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Martie
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0 posted 2004-12-20 08:54 PM



Ornaments of love


Now the sun a twinkle gives
while catching dew in morning's sieve
and lemons on a lemon tree
are ornaments of love to me

Here early morning December brings
skies cleaned by Santa Ana’s wing
the flowing invisible angel wind
that leaves the air a sparkling

And after night and winter’s chill
brings crisp and clean to the browning hills
I remember well the Christmas tree
and icicles tossed so merrily

Thrown by random hands of four
while laughter sang and fire roared.
My memory stores a family song
with mother on the piano strong

and brother somber hiding there
under the stool where he could share
the movement of the peddles fast
the soft persistent brother task

Then I would sing the carols all
so grand and loud the notes did fall
that candles flickered and gramps woke-up
and father clapped as I stood up

The memory of an angel bright
that graced the room a holy sight
made of laughter and dressed in song
so large with us the family throng

and what had made her presence known
wasn’t wrapped but fully shown
by us together in a place
where love herself saw fit to grace.

Now the sun a twinkle gives
while catching dew in morning's sieve
and lemons on a lemon tree
are ornaments of love to me
___

12-99

© Copyright 2004 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-12-20 11:33 PM


Beautiful Christmas memories, Martie!

~sky

Have a Holly Jolly Christmas! Jesus is the reason for the season!!

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2 posted 2004-12-21 12:18 PM


Love the way you reminisce!

This was precious

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2004-12-21 07:31 AM


Beautiful memories Martie!

  Happy Holidays!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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4 posted 2004-12-21 03:23 PM


MartieSis~
How beautifully you wrap the most endearing poetic memories~
This is lovely my friend~

Merry CHRISTmas to you and yours in this celebration season~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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5 posted 2004-12-21 03:30 PM


Beautiful Martie, the poem and you.

Mxx

it's a

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

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6 posted 2004-12-21 05:21 PM


Christmas is for memories and you have captured them so lovingly.  I loved it.  Joyce
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7 posted 2004-12-23 10:50 PM


Oh, Martie, this poem does paint a wonderful picture!  Never having thought of lemons at Christmas time, this verse especially leaves me thinking.

  "Now the sun a twinkle gives
while catching dew in morning's sieve
and lemons on a lemon tree
are ornaments of love to me"


I so enjoy your lovely poetry, Martie!  Merry Christmas to you Sweet One!

       miscellanea

___

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8 posted 2005-11-14 11:49 PM


Martie, a jewel of a read poetfriend!

kayjay
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9 posted 2005-12-02 09:43 PM


This is a fine piece of writing.  I'm so glad I found it.  There is much to enjoy it your writing.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

StevenS
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10 posted 2005-12-03 07:48 PM


Very nice Martie, I felt as though I was there with you. :-) Merry Christmas!
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11 posted 2005-12-03 08:15 PM



A very beautiful write dear Martie.

~Let peace begin with me...

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12 posted 2005-12-12 03:14 PM


grin...ya HAD to know I wasn't celebrating without YOU!

Santa Ana...that's a lovely touch.


Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2006-12-13 12:48 PM



To da' top of the tree~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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14 posted 2006-12-13 01:48 PM


Beautiful and unique as always martie!

smiles,
constance

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15 posted 2006-12-18 04:51 PM


A memory of California Christmases. Lovely !
Joyce

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16 posted 2006-12-19 01:51 PM


How happy I am to have visited this site and found this ornamental treasure!  

   Rae

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17 posted 2006-12-19 03:54 PM


Memories that you share beautifully with us...the vision you paint is wonderful to see....**BIG HUGS**
ChristopherRobin
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18 posted 2007-07-13 06:39 PM


Well done, this has real potential it could easily become a one of those favoured classics that generations many years from now could still be enjoying reading and relaying. Well done sincerely.
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19 posted 2007-10-08 01:56 PM


Ornamnets of love"

lovely title

ARCTIC WIND

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