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Thomas J. Allie Junior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 11NY USA |
Fireworks A sound of a loud thud. BLAST!!!!!!!! The coloers of red,green,gold,and blue in the air. Then a short silence.... booooooommmmmmmmmm!!!!!!! A loud explosion breaks the barrier of silence. All shapes and sizes everwhere. July 4th 2003 |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
Awesome. But you might want to fix your spelling of the word "COLORS" in the third line. Otherwise, this was an explosive poem. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Good to see you here Thomas. It is the silence between each firework isnt it. the wait, so exciting. You descibed it exactly here. Hope you enjoyed your 4 th of July celebrations!  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
With no rain in some areas, this may be the only fireworks some people see...let's rename them 'firewords'.... |
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