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Thomas J. Allie
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0 posted 06-13-2003 09:18 PM       View Profile for Thomas J. Allie   Email Thomas J. Allie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Thomas J. Allie

                 Fireworks

A sound of a loud  thud.
BLAST!!!!!!!!
The coloers of red,green,gold,and blue in the air.
Then a short silence....
booooooommmmmmmmmm!!!!!!!
A loud explosion breaks the barrier of silence.
All shapes and sizes everwhere.
July 4th 2003  
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Albert J. Allie
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1 posted 06-15-2003 09:31 AM       View Profile for Albert J. Allie   Email Albert J. Allie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Albert J. Allie

Awesome.
But you might want to fix your spelling of the word "COLORS" in the third line. Otherwise, this was an explosive poem.
gemjop
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2 posted 07-09-2003 07:21 PM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

Good to see you here Thomas. It is the silence between each firework isnt it. the wait, so exciting. You descibed it exactly here. Hope you enjoyed your 4 th of July celebrations!


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With no rain in some areas, this may be the only fireworks some people see...let's rename them 'firewords'....
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