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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2003-01-13 04:38 PM


Holidays,
So many in a year,
I'm not allowed to drink beer.
Christmas, in the winter,
makes me whimper.

Holidays,
So many in a year,
I'm not allowed to hear,
crazy deer.

This poem makes no sense,
and reflects pure unintelligent thoughts.

© Copyright 2003 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
merlynh
Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 411
deer park, wa
1 posted 2004-12-23 01:42 AM


"reflects pure unintelligent thoughts." This is to go without saying when it comes to a poem yet I wonder with some.  I can't figure out why this post hasn't recieved more replies. It does have something the other do not--unintelligent thougts.

Cute thanks for sharing.

miscellanea
Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060
OH
2 posted 2004-12-23 06:10 PM


Leave it to me and I can make sense out of unintelligent thoughts!  First off, I understand about the holiday thing and beer or mixed drinks.  I'm going to be going to a reception and will be unable to drink mixed drinks/medication, yuck!  Shucks!
   As far as unitelligent thoughts, doesn't it take intelligence to wonder and question whether something is intelligent or not? Frankly, I don't think there are any unintelligent questions or thoughts.  It's all just food for thinking...One can choose the level of thought one puts into anything... even something that sounds stupid or strange.  This is where invention and creativity take over.  
   Enjoyed.   Happy holidays, Kellie.

        miscellanea

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