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cherrylips
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0 posted 12-04-2002 08:02 AM       View Profile for cherrylips   Email cherrylips   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrylips


Children playing in the snow,
To each others houses families go.
People gathering to share in the fun,
Of Christmas times when they were young.

Oh the season is here so lets rejoice,
Its Christmas time you have no choice.
Don't be miserable and dont despair,
Remember that the festive spirit is in the air.

Its time for partys and lots of wine,
Cheer up, you're sure to have a good time.
Santa on his way and his helpers too,
So hurry up and shift those Christmas blues.

Presents sitting beneath the tree,
That are waiting there for you and me.
The music playing everywhere,
Times like this are oh so rare.

You get the chance just once a year,
so put on a smile and wip away that tear.
Once more I wish you Chrismtas cheer,
Once more I tell you the season is here!
© Copyright 2002 Danielle - All Rights Reserved
earthman
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1 posted 12-07-2002 02:50 PM       View Profile for earthman   Email earthman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for earthman

Well Cherrylips or shall we change it to Cheerylips, nice piece all though it did get me a little down at first.
cherrylips
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2 posted 12-08-2002 10:27 AM       View Profile for cherrylips   Email cherrylips   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for cherrylips

Thank you for your honesty I did feel a little down when I began this peom so it was a method of self motivation and I guess you must have felt that. As always constructive critism is welcome, dx
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3 posted 12-08-2002 11:46 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

CherryLips~

I see just the slight hues
of your lilting Christmas blues
Then I see tiny sips ...
of a Cheery smile upon your lips~

A delightfully inspirational read~
Have a beautiful day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


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aries_luv_ppl
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4 posted 12-11-2002 03:55 PM       View Profile for aries_luv_ppl   Email aries_luv_ppl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit aries_luv_ppl's Home Page   View IP for aries_luv_ppl

a comforting piece. Nicely done, girl.

Eliza Simmons
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Earth Angel
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5 posted 12-12-2002 10:47 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

It was good to read that the Christmas blues gave way to the cheery reds and greens of the season!

~ Hoping that your Christmas will be very merry!

EA
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6 posted 12-18-2002 02:38 PM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

Absolutely!

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

 
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