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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2001-12-25 04:14 AM


Lovely breeze knocks on your windows
whispering Christmas is near.
Tolling bells dance with the wind
announcing to living and nature-
Behold! Peace is near.

Lovely breeze sings along the chords,
accompanying the songs of Christ.
Instrumental sound of the bells
touch corners of the sea.
Behold! May peace be with you.

Lovely breeze accompanied by my voice
singing out a greeting to you.
Quietly sit by the fire,
do you feel the touch of the season?
Be calm, let my song comfort you.

~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.
~Just when I thought it is too far away, opportunity knocks the door

© Copyright 2001 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
BloomingRose
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1 posted 2001-12-26 08:14 AM


I could feel the breeze of peace settle over me as I read this lovely poem.
Hope your holiday will be filled with joy and peace.

Deb

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2 posted 2001-12-27 12:29 PM




(sigh) Enchantingly beautiful, sweet friend! The loving echoes of Christ's song reverberate in your beautiful words, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) God Bless Yiou, sweet friend, we all love you so much and wish you the happiest holidays! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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3 posted 2001-12-27 12:50 PM


This is a beautiful piece... very well written.  Thanks so much for sharing this with us.  Even thought Christmas is over, the Christmas spirit certainly isn't

--Marie

"It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

Poet deVine
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4 posted 2002-12-01 01:27 PM


We all need some calm from the Christmas Breeze.
BloomingRose
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5 posted 2002-12-02 11:42 AM


A welcome and lovely repost.

Deb

aries_luv_ppl
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6 posted 2002-12-02 01:41 PM


thanks you! to all of you I'm glad that you like the poem.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

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