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Erin Gilchrist
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0 posted 11-29-2001 02:17 PM       View Profile for Erin Gilchrist   Email Erin Gilchrist   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin Gilchrist


four candels for Christmas
one candel for faith
one candel for trust
one candel for love
one candel for hope

four candels for Christmas
the flaims shine brite
wind starts to blowe

faith's flaime dies away
extinguwishd by the wind

trust was to week
extinguwishd by the wind

love was to littel
extinguwishd by the wind

only hope burns on
and as the wind dies away
shaires its fire
so faith, trust and love
start breething again

© Copyright 2001 Erin Gilchrist - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 12-01-2001 09:14 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lovely imagery Erin. Let's keep that candle of hope burning!  
Lighthousebob
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2 posted 12-01-2001 01:53 PM       View Profile for Lighthousebob   Email Lighthousebob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lighthousebob's Home Page   View IP for Lighthousebob

Erin,

This is a beautiful analogy...  even when faith, trust, and love flicker out... we can still have hope that the flames will be rekindled.  Again, beautiful.  -Bob
OLIAS
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3 posted 12-04-2001 09:49 PM       View Profile for OLIAS   Email OLIAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OLIAS

I liked this very much, hope burns eternal, thanks for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.
Justbleu
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4 posted 12-08-2001 12:54 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This is wonderful, Erin!!!!  I enjoyed this very much!!!!

Merrry Christmas!!!!

Bridgette  
 
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