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The spirite of Christmas

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Erin Gilchrist
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0 posted 11-29-2001 01:43 PM       View Profile for Erin Gilchrist   Email Erin Gilchrist   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erin Gilchrist


The spirite of Christmas
is a star
wich shines upon the worled
and falls down
like a shoeting star
to toutch the children
of the worled
rite in there harts


by Erin
© Copyright 2001 Erin Gilchrist - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-29-2001 02:14 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Welcome to Passions, Erin!
Erin Gilchrist
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thank you Sunshine  
OLIAS
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well done and beautifully written, welcome to Passions Erin I hope you enjoy your stay.

Regards,
Olias.
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4 posted 12-06-2001 12:22 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Erin~
Lovely sentiments to share~
WELCOME to Passions~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Quite sweet...I liked it!!!!  
Welcome to Passions Erin!!!!

Merry Christmas!!!!

Bridgette  
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6 posted 12-13-2001 11:59 AM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

Dear Erin,
I loved the sentiment and imagery in this short poem. You might try a spell-check on it, as you had a lot of misspelled words, which made it a little hard for me to focus on your message.  

Nan

 
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