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Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

0 posted 2001-06-30 04:47 PM

Freedom
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Freedom
As I slowly speak out loud
to taste the sense within
Of this simple word
As freedom

How comes
it overwhelmed me
With melancholy,
do I still taste fragrance
of blood

Why do I still hear the cry
Of warriors from elsewhere
Fighting for their rights
Giving their lives
For Freedom

Right of every humans being
But many aren’t allowed
To taste a fragrance
Of this costly word
Like freedom

Freedom
A small simple word
But contains so much more
More than history ever told
'cause it's a part of every soul

So please cherish always
the freedom from within
'cause without doing that
you can't stand for
Freedom

Charisma
~*TMP*~
30/06/01

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-07-03 04:37 PM

A very patriotic piece. I really enjoyed this poem Charisma. It put me in the spirit of the 4th of July. Very wonderful indeed.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

2 posted 2001-07-06 03:13 PM

You've expressed Freedom very well. Thanks for sharing.

Melton

Carolina
Member

since 2001-08-17

Posts 224
Myrtle Beach, SC

3 posted 2001-10-11 02:26 PM

I think this needs to be put back on top of the list.. freedom rings loud in this piece. I enjoyed reading this very much.

Live today as if it's your last. Love today as if it's your first. Lisa

sunshinemist
Senior Member

since 2001-09-29

Posts 595
Fl. sunshines early mist

4 posted 2001-10-11 06:36 PM

Charisma, Thank you so much for sharing this poem. Freedom is a wonderful gift that we need to preserve.

~hugs and God Bless~

smiles ~Marie~

Keep the Faith

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 2004-05-30 11:16 AM

A bump for Memorial Day.

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