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jeremydraul
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0 posted 02-04-2001 10:26 PM       View Profile for jeremydraul   Email jeremydraul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jeremydraul

I thought red might be a proper color! This is what Im going to send to the person Ive been seeing lately. Please give me * H O N E S T*  feedback PLEASE!

'Valentineís Ode'

The past memorable days,
Have been quite a blast.
You took away the grays,
And made my heart last.

To you I owe my blessing,
For being ever so kind.
Although it becomes stressing,
Upon my heart you wind.

I hope weíll be one someday,
And travel down loving roads.
Itís hard to find the words to say,
But you earned this special ode.

With these words, you need to know,
My admiration of you will shine.
Thereís one more thing before I go,
Will you be my Valentine?

Jeremy Raulinaitis



"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)
© Copyright 2001 Jeremy Daniel Raulinaitis - All Rights Reserved
Dopey Dope
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1 posted 02-05-2001 01:08 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Hey jer, I think this was smashing!! I liked it and she will too!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
BSC
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2 posted 02-06-2001 05:42 PM       View Profile for BSC   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BSC

Agreeing with DD here ~ It's adorable and she definitely will love it.  Bonnie
jeremydraul
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3 posted 02-07-2001 12:44 AM       View Profile for jeremydraul   Email jeremydraul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jeremydraul

thanks a lot... i really appreciate it.


"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)
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4 posted 02-07-2001 01:39 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

You did a wonderful job with this poem. I hope she agrees to be you valentine.  

Sometimes we have to follow a stronger voice, even if it's silent.


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5 posted 02-11-2001 12:31 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I like it! I hope she does to. But how can she not, it's written from your heart....
jeremydraul
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6 posted 02-13-2001 09:51 PM       View Profile for jeremydraul   Email jeremydraul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jeremydraul

this is what i got for a response when i gave it to her... "Its cute."

Depressingly,
Jeremy


"Life is fading me away, far away, but Iím sketching myself back, line by line, mark by mark." - Jeremy Raulinaitis---'Fading Me Away'
 
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