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Wedding Vows, His Lines (Revised) and Wedding Vows 1 (revised)

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Miss Abagail Mannering
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0 posted 02-02-2001 10:59 AM       View Profile for Miss Abagail Mannering   Email Miss Abagail Mannering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Miss Abagail Mannering

WEdding Vows 2 his lines

I Vow to stand by you
' for better or worse'
and whether or not
there's cash in the purse.

"In sickness and health"
young or old-
I pledge my love
with this band of gold.      (he puts the ring on my hand here.)

Through PMS, Childbirth,
and all of those things...
I swear I will share
with these Wedding Rings.

I vow to love you
with all of my heart-
"to honor and cherish,
'til death do us part."


This is a Pre-Valentine/pre-wedding poem for my fiance'. these are his lines.
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WEdding Vows 1
(my lines)

With this ring, I thee wed.            (I put his ring on)
More precious words have never been said.
Vows said today shall last forever.
For, we are each other's treasure.

At last, I found my froggy prince
after all of the pond scum...
I finally got my peice of cake,
instead of just the crumbs!

From this day forward, I am your wife.
I'll be yours the rest of my life.
So, take my hand," 'til death do us part,"
and know that I love you with every beat of my heart.
© Copyright 2001 Shanna Casinger - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-02-2001 01:27 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Very sweet wedding vows. Congratulations to the both of you!
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2 posted 02-02-2001 11:59 PM       View Profile for Acies   Email Acies   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Acies

I'm loving it....great idea for poems

I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR


HopeS
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3 posted 02-03-2001 01:59 AM       View Profile for HopeS   Email HopeS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HopeS's Home Page   View IP for HopeS

Great vows and sharing of heart
until death  do you part
Congrats
Hope
The ifs , buts
whys and somehows
me and mine still cherish our
wedding vows
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4 posted 02-03-2001 04:28 PM       View Profile for Temptress*Moon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Temptress*Moon

Congrats! Think you would be willing to right mine for me*S*
*giggles*
Temptress*Moon



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5 posted 02-04-2001 12:39 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Wow, very sweet here.
Congrats!!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
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6 posted 02-04-2001 10:20 PM       View Profile for jeremydraul   Email jeremydraul   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jeremydraul

i think I would fall to my knees if someone ever wrote something like that for me. Beautiful words! Very sweet....

Jeremy


"I believe that man will not merely endure: he will prevail. -William Faulkner (Noble Prize Speech.)
Miss Abagail Mannering
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7 posted 02-06-2001 10:52 AM       View Profile for Miss Abagail Mannering   Email Miss Abagail Mannering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss Abagail Mannering

*blushes* thanks you guys...
Temptress moon, I'd be happy to try  
Jeremy... off your knees boy, and get a tissue... that was a very sweet thing for you to say.  *sniffles with a smile*
I wish my Finance' enjoyed the poems as much as y'all did!

"Ya have to kiss a lot of frogs before you meet your prince... just watch out for all the pond scum!!!"
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