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A Santa MixUp

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kindasorta
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0 posted 12-08-2000 12:52 AM       View Profile for kindasorta   Email kindasorta   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for kindasorta


Santa's Visit


Bbbuuurrrr!  Cold December morning
two weeks  from Christmas Day
and counting as I looked across the morning's darkness,
stars still twinkling on high
Jack Frost reflections
graced the grass
Then within a instant I saw a Red  flash!!
What?  Rubing my eyes with a second look,
how could this be, Santa's timing mistook?

I called out saying, "Santa, its me, a grown up, Come here".
Peeking from around a nearby tree
there he stood staring back at me,
a smile so wide he could hardly hide
rosey cheeks and red dress suit
all decked out in his new black boots
as he wabbled toward my door.

Come in Santa, lets talk awhile
still he continued with that hugh bright smile.
I warmed some milk and made a bother,
pleasing him as he yawned and swallowed.

Inquiring where his sleigh might be
he sheepishly looked up and grined at me,
learning Santa would not squeak,
I removed the ropes from around his feet.

Said, Santa now your free to go,
don't forget the date you'll need to show!
Remember the request I placed in your pouch?
Otherwise, your secrets out!

"Santa", I said, as he walked away,
"DECEMBER 25th, Santa, that's the DAY"!



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Dark Angel
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1 posted 12-09-2000 01:42 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Hi kindasorta
This is definatley charming isn't it? Good ol'e Santa, he is so adorable. You looked after him well.
Enjoyed it very much.

Welcome to Passions!


Maree  


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and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this wouldn't be enough"
"Maree Russo"



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2 posted 12-09-2000 01:54 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

I thought this was great. A wonderful read.
Happy holidays to you!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

SwEeTnSeXy18
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3 posted 12-16-2000 08:22 PM       View Profile for SwEeTnSeXy18   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SwEeTnSeXy18

kindasorta:

This was a cute, charming poem. I liked how you made Santa forgetful seeing how he is supposed to know everything (under God that is. You put me in the Holiday spirit. Thanks!   Take care.

~Lisa~


~in order to gain, you have to lose~


Justbleu
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4 posted 12-08-2001 06:23 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This was sooo cute....I like your little visit with Santa!!!!!

Merry Christmas!!!

Bridgette  

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