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Christmas is Coming

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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 11-27-2000 02:28 PM       View Profile for Professor Gloom   Email Professor Gloom   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Professor Gloom's Home Page   View IP for Professor Gloom

Was a month before Christmas and all through the mall,
Carols were blaring as tin speakers monotone did call,
The garlands and lights were on ever exposed surfaces,
Like the chocolates smeared on the children’s fat faces.

As Santa changed to dry pants, his third of the day,
The Happy Valley Quintet was starting to play.
The food court was busying serving the crowd,
The HVQ wasn’t very good but rather loud.

Center stage was an act by a hyperactive boy
Rolling and wailing over a $50 toy,
The little girl kept her skirt pulled over her head,
And both mother and father had faces that were red.

just a few verses I added to a poem elsewhere
feel free to add a few yourself,
think of it as therapy
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1 posted 11-27-2000 09:13 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

We don't need therapy yet...give it a week!!
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2 posted 11-29-2000 07:04 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Scary isn't it?!!
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This one got a little chuckle out of me. I HATE going to the malls at Christmas time, but can still take joy in the fact that the little face's that hope for the toys, and enjoy all the candy with smeary faces, are a big part of the fun of Christmas.
Lets don't dred the aftermath yet!  
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4 posted 11-30-2000 10:49 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Therapy for what? haha

great beginning......hope to see others contribute in their "therapy" sessions.



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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