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Solstice Son
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0 posted 11-21-2000 03:40 PM       View Profile for Solstice Son   Email Solstice Son   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Solstice Son

...my apologies up front to all the Rogers and Hammerstein devotees....Sol


The cat ate my roses
there's holes in my mittens
the gal at the bookstore
has left me quite smitten
so I go buy books
on my cat's and knitting
but she's dating a doctor!!
lamenting, I sing!!


How I'd love to go walking
with her hand in mine
we'd build up a snowman with wife by his side
oh yes I'm quite taken
with the Bookstore Lady
but she's dating a doctor
cause that is her 'dream'

when she wakes and
sees my face and
puts her hand in mine
then we'll go out walking and talking and then
I'll take doctor's place!!!

Cause SHE'S MINE!!!!!


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1 posted 11-22-2000 08:03 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Cute!!! And there's an added incentive to dating someone in a bookstore - you know when the next shipment of new books is coming!!  
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2 posted 11-22-2000 11:38 AM       View Profile for OLIAS   Email OLIAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OLIAS

Great poem and a good idea, I enjoyed it Thanks.

Regards,
Olias
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4 posted 11-24-2000 04:30 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

this was great.
you know i love your work!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

deleeme
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5 posted 11-25-2000 09:04 AM       View Profile for deleeme   Email deleeme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit deleeme's Home Page   View IP for deleeme

This is one singing place around here.  I enjoyed your rendition, hope she sees that doctors ain't everything!
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Wonderful. Hand in hand*sigh* maybe she will come to her senses.  Thank you so much for the read

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com
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