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Annies' Prayer...Two Years Later
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You should really read Annies' Wish before this one Hi God its Annie How are you up there? I have a favor to ask YOU If You have a moment to spare I know mommy's there Up in heaven with YOU Can You tell her about us? How we're starting brand new? See daddy has found A new mommy for me I still love my old one God She special to me I know daddy still loves her There's still nights he cries But more often now There's joy in his eyes She loves us both And God I like her too And I really believe She's an angel from You God could you tell my mommy That I love her so And I'll never forget her I just wanted her to know This Christmas Eve is special Because God You see Tonight he's gonna ask her To marry him and me And God I know We will be truly blessed If You could just get her To please say yes So God this is Annie Its time for me to go Tell my mommy I love her And that I miss her so Merry Christmas to You God And all your angels too Merry Christmas from Annie And God?....thank You. |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Oh wow that just made me cry that is a wonderful poem snif lol Suzanne |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This was so sad. BUt it's great you're moving on and so is your daddy. This is wonderful. The poem almost made me cry! I loved it! SUch wonderful expression.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This was beautiful! I love the happy ending sequel. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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PoetryNest Junior Member
since 2000-11-08
Posts 46Orlando, FL. 32703 |
This was a tear jerker, for sure ! Very effective. You voiced the child's sincerity so well. Touching. Cynthia (A Dove) Proctor |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Such a sad poem, but I love the hopeful tone you use. I enjoyed this very much, and I also enjoyed "Annie's Wish". Keep up the great work!  False gems may shine as brightly as the genuine article, but there are always those who can tell the difference. |
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