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Annies' Prayer...Two Years Later

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Paula Finn
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0 posted 11-08-2000 01:15 PM       View Profile for Paula Finn   Email Paula Finn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Paula Finn

You should really read Annies' Wish before this one

Hi God its Annie
How are you up there?
I have a favor to ask YOU
If You have a moment to spare
I know mommy's there
Up in heaven with YOU
Can You tell her about us?
How we're starting brand new?
See daddy has found
A new mommy for me
I still love my old one God
She special to me
I know daddy still loves her
There's still nights he cries
But more often now
There's joy in his eyes
She loves us both
And God I like her too
And I really believe
She's an angel from You
God could you tell my mommy
That I love her so
And I'll never forget her
I just wanted her to know
This Christmas Eve is special
Because God You see
Tonight he's gonna ask her
To marry him and me
And God I know
We will be truly blessed
If You could just get her
To please say yes
So God this is Annie
Its time for me to go
Tell my mommy I love her
And that I miss her so
Merry Christmas to You God
And all your angels too
Merry Christmas from Annie
And God?....thank You.

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1 posted 11-08-2000 02:51 PM       View Profile for Suzanne Arlene   Email Suzanne Arlene   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Suzanne Arlene

Oh wow that just made me cry
that is a wonderful poem snif  lol
Suzanne
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2 posted 11-08-2000 05:06 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

This was so sad. BUt it's great you're moving on and so is your daddy. This is wonderful. The poem almost made me cry! I loved it! SUch wonderful expression.



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3 posted 11-08-2000 07:00 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

This was beautiful! I love the happy ending sequel.

Elizabeth


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Suum cuique.
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4 posted 11-09-2000 02:07 AM       View Profile for PoetryNest   Email PoetryNest   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit PoetryNest's Home Page   View IP for PoetryNest

This was a tear jerker, for sure ! Very effective. You voiced the child's sincerity so well. Touching.

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5 posted 11-09-2000 04:30 PM       View Profile for LoveBug   Email LoveBug   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LoveBug

Such a sad poem, but I love the hopeful tone you use. I enjoyed this very much, and I also enjoyed "Annie's Wish". Keep up the great work!  

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