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Wee Elf Boogie

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Mike
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0 posted 11-06-2000 09:01 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Mike



                The wee'est elf,
                To all did say,
                It's Friday night,
                Come on, let's play.

                We've toiled all week,
                We've earned our keep,
                Let's have some fun,
                Before we sleep.

                We'll boogie hard;
                Shake our booties,
                Forget about,
                Our North Pole duties.

                I'll tell you what,
                We'll kareoke,
                Wee elf asked all,
                Okie Dokie?

                Rudolph yelled,
                Let's party down,
                'Cause Santa Claus,
                Has went to town.

                The toy shop shook,
                As out came Prancer,
                To sing a song,
                With stall-mate Dancer.

                "I've Got You Babe."
                To the letter,
                Sonny and Cher,
                Could do no better.

                But then a hush,
                Fell on shop floor,
                As Santa Claus,
                Walked through the door.

                All elves and reindeer,
                Held their breath,
                With visions of,
                Impending death.

                Who's in charge,
                Of this fiasco?
                You've turned toy shop,
                Into a disco!!!

                Wee elf replied,
                It was me sir,
                Your wrath and ire,
                I will incur.

                Santa beckoned,
                Come here wee elf,
                And placed wee smirf,
                Upon top shelf.

                As wee elf quaked,
                In wee elf fear,
                Said Santa Claus,
                All listen hear.

                He then commenced,
                Gyrating hips,
                "Blue Suede Shoes,"
                From forth his lips.

                Elves and reindeer,
                Dropped their jaws,
                As they all stared,
                At Santa Claus.

                The party roared,
                All through the night,
                It lasted til,
                The dawn's first light.

                When to wee bed,
                Wee elf then crept,
                With wee elf smile,
                Wee elf then slept.
© Copyright 2000 Mike - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-07-2000 12:32 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

A wonderful ending. I love how this whole poem flowed. Quite nicely penned!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

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2 posted 11-07-2000 01:10 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I loved this! I could see the disco in my mind's eye...well done!

Elizabeth


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth


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3 posted 11-07-2000 05:25 PM       View Profile for BloomingRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BloomingRose

lol, got on them blue suede shoes, a real hoot that wee little elf!
Deb
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4 posted 12-13-2001 12:38 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mike~
*giggling* with the boogie-beat~
Happy Holidays to you my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 12-14-2001 07:41 AM       View Profile for 2dalimit   Email 2dalimit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2dalimit

The Wee Elf tales are a great part of the Christmas spirit. Thanks.


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6 posted 12-14-2001 04:59 PM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

Dear Mike,
I loved it. I knew Santa could boogey down!

Nan

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7 posted 12-16-2001 09:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Simply charming, Mike! I love all the wee elf stories!
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8 posted 12-16-2001 11:23 PM       View Profile for ecrivan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ecrivan's Home Page   View IP for ecrivan

liked this original boogie rendition and it's neat flow.
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9 posted 12-21-2001 10:04 PM       View Profile for OLIAS   Email OLIAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OLIAS

Thanks for the smile from this wee gem.

Regards,
Olias.
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10 posted 12-20-2007 10:59 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

ing some Christmas cheer~

Wee wittle elf is SUCH A JOY~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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11 posted 12-20-2007 12:22 PM       View Profile for Pilgrimage   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pilgrimage

I love it!  I can see the fat man singing.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

 
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