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tracie66
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There's a biscuit on the table
A glass of milk too
never in my wildest dreams
Did I expect to see you
I snuck out of my bed
took a peek behind the door
I blinked once then once more
Still it was you I saw
It was you santa standing there
Writing me a note
Thanking me for the cookie's
You'd just stuffed down your throat
I will never forget my surprise
On that Christmas night
Next time santa I'll tell mum
To upgrade you to a sprite

My daughter when she was 4 wondered why we always gave Santa a glass of milk and why couldn't he have a glass of sprite lemonade and so I wrote this for her.

Tracie~



Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


© Copyright 2000 Tracie Maree Collis - All Rights Reserved
Lakewalker
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1 posted 11-04-2000 06:28 PM       View Profile for Lakewalker   Email Lakewalker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lakewalker

This is so cute, I like it a lot!   I like the colors too.  Nice job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!
Poet deVine
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2 posted 11-04-2000 06:33 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

How cute!!! I like this.    
CocoBaci
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3 posted 11-04-2000 08:26 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Adorable Tracie...

Coco
Elizabeth
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4 posted 11-04-2000 10:25 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

How cute! Yes, Virginia, there is a Santa Claus, and he needs his calcium...LOL!

Elizabeth


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth


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5 posted 11-05-2000 02:11 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

A great poem to read to your daughter!!
I liked it!



"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!
tracie66
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6 posted 11-05-2000 04:39 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

lakewalker~
Thanks for your great comments  
Tracie~
P.S Love your name, I have a lake near me which I love to walk around  

PdV~
I'm glad you liked and found it cute   Thanks
Tracie~

Coco~
Thanks hon, glad you found it adorable  
Tracie~

Elizabeth~
...LOL actually Santa is alot healthier these days, when I was growing up santa was always offered a glass of cold beer  
Love Tracie~

DD~
Hi   so glad you liked
Tracie~



Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Rex Allen McCoy
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7 posted 11-08-2000 11:59 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

now thats a treasure
tracie66
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8 posted 11-10-2000 03:10 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

~Rex~

always love to see you
glad you enjoyed
~Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Dr.Moose1
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9 posted 11-10-2000 06:03 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Ah , for the eyes of a child again . Thanks Tracie , this was great .
Doc
tracie66
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Doc~
Glad you enjoyed  
Through the imagination of a child we can create anything
Tracie~



Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


 
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