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White Wolf
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0 posted 01-26-2000 04:15 AM       View Profile for White Wolf   Email White Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for White Wolf

There I sat
Alone in my darkness
With walls all around my heart
Completely closed off to the world

I felt your radiance
Even before you entered the room
I knew my life was about to change
And change it did

You breached my walls
Stormed my defenses
You tossed my troubles away
And took hold of my heart

I still can recall that day
In every detail
And yet I do not know
What has happened to me

You invited me over
We had dinner by candlelight
We cuddled as we watched a movie
As I turned to leave you kissed me goodnight

On the drive home
I wondered, why is this happening
Then with tears of joy, I realized
She is my valentine


This is written with a heavy heart.  I have never like Valentine's Day.  I have yet to have a good one.  The one in this poem, she does exsist.  I messed up and it is over.  I just wish she knew how I truely feel.  Anyways, you guys keep on writing and have a happy Valentine's Day.


 "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life.  To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."


[This message has been edited by Scorched Dragon (edited 01-26-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Justin D. Schroeder - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-26-2000 06:33 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

This is a beautiful poem, Scorched Dragon. You write well. Have you showed it to her? If you did perhaps that would patch things up. I know I would melt over a poem like this if one had been written for me!

Elizabeth

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2 posted 01-26-2000 06:48 PM       View Profile for White Wolf   Email White Wolf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for White Wolf

No she hasn't seen it.  No guts on my part.  But maybe I should remember the old saying and advice I have given, "No guts, no glory."  I have always been scared of lossing her friendship, she is a wonderful friend.  But maybe now is the time.  I think I will this Valentine's Day.  Who knows maybe it will be my first good one.  Thanx.

 "Life's greatest mystery isn't the meaning of life. To love and be loved is the meaning of life. Now how to attain those is the greatest mystery of all."
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3 posted 01-26-2000 07:08 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is a beautiful poem, Scorched Dragon! I wish you the best!  
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4 posted 01-27-2000 01:59 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

I hope so! Once again, good luck!

Elizabeth

 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

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5 posted 01-29-2000 05:30 AM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

A beautiful poem indeed ! I hope this year will be a very good Valentine.  
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6 posted 02-03-2000 08:04 PM       View Profile for dovesongs   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dovesongs

Oh, please do send this to her.  I wish you a happy ending.  Don't let fear get in your way, most of the time truly good friends do appreciate honesty.  (Just a thought).
Anyway, best wishes for your and Happy Valentine's Day.  You will be in our prayers.
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