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Denise
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0 posted 01-25-2000 10:28 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Denise

You glanced my way one day and stole my heart
Without intending to ignite a flame
You set my world ablaze right from the start
And since that day my life’s not been the same.

You fit me like a finely crafted glove
Italian leather’s supple quality
Provides to me warm comfort in a love
That holds me close yet sets my spirit free.

A life preserver you had been that day
In raging waters where I nearly drowned
You pulled me in and carried me away
And set these feet upon the shore’s firm ground.

Forever and a day we’ll sing love’s song
Within each other’s arms where we belong.


Denise





[This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 02-14-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Denise - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 01-25-2000 12:59 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

*sigh* Can I read it again?

 "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

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2 posted 01-25-2000 02:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes you may, Angela, as often as you like...hehehehe.....thanks!
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3 posted 01-25-2000 07:13 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautiful! We may set a record for 'sighs' in this forum....write as many as you like!!!
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4 posted 01-25-2000 08:06 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Sharon, I'm glad you liked it!
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Alright you got me too....with one BIG SIGH. Got some more do ya?  huh? do ya? hehe

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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6 posted 01-26-2000 07:05 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thanks, Rebecca! I'm glad you liked it!  
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7 posted 01-26-2000 11:40 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Denise,
this is beautiful...I hope the person who inspired it was as impressed with it as I am...hope he writes one back for you on Valentines Day...
oh and by the way...SIGH...(smile)
Janet Marie

 ..."She says baby,
It's 3am I must be lonely,
When she says baby,
Well I can't help but be scared of it all sometimes,
Says the rains gonna wash away I believe it."
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8 posted 01-27-2000 11:23 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thanks, Janet Marie, I'm glad you liked it!
He'll be getting this as a combination wedding anniversary/Valentine's Day present. I'm sure he'll like it since he's a bit on the sentimental side! Thanks again for reading and commenting!  

Denise
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9 posted 01-27-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

another *sigh*

Beautiful as always, Denise!

Elizabeth

 "He have his goodness now. God forbid I take it from him!"
-The Crucible

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Thanks, Elizabeth! I'm glad you liked it!
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11 posted 01-27-2000 07:34 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Denise-
This is just plain purty !
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12 posted 01-28-2000 12:08 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thanks Marge! I'm glad you like it!
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Denise, I just have to add one too ! *SIGH* Beautiful.
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14 posted 01-29-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Munda! I'm so glad you liked it!

Denise
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Now that is a love poem. I like it, that husband of yours will love it.  Very, very nice!  ohhhhhh....ahhhhhhhh....So glad you are lucky in love. (so to speak)
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Thanks, Dovesongs! I'm glad you liked it!
Denise
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17 posted 02-04-2000 11:15 PM       View Profile for Willem   Email Willem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Willem

Denise,  thank you for this beautiful and so inspiring poem!  It reminded me just in time
to think about writing one myself as an
economy Valentine surprise for my dear
Frieda... Oh! She's been reading my computer
screen over my shoulder and now it won't be
a surprise any more. Guess I'll have to make
a trip to the florist as yet, now...

Willem
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18 posted 02-06-2000 03:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thank you, Willem! I'm glad you enjoyed it! I think poetry and flowers both make wonderful gifts, surprise or not!    

Denise
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Bump!
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Piece of work here*S* This was beautiful  
Temptress*Moon



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21 posted 02-04-2001 12:41 AM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Very nicely written!!
Ooo



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I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
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I really like this one. Sounds just like a love letter for any day you are in love. You have got a real special man there. I add my "sighs" to this as well.

How can you save me?
When the dark comes right in and takes me,
from my front walk and into bed,
where it kisses my face and eats my head. Shivaree
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Awwwwwwww this was so cute 8) Great tribute my dear...

Jeremy


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24 posted 02-05-2001 09:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Thanks, Sharon, Temptress*Moon, Dopey_Dope, Shawna and Jeremy for reading and for your lovely replies! I haven't written a new one this year yet, so I guess I'll be dusting this one off and giving it to him again...hehehe
 
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