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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Dear Santa, One day not too long ago, I sat down and wrote "Dear Santa," on a piece of white paper, a note; now, not just any note I know, but a very special one, because I'm not of kiddy age, I've far surpassed 21! "Dear Santa, please, allow me to explain…" I wrote before I could think back to when I last wrote to Santa, so very, very long ago, when asking for presents was indeed the vogue. "I am not here asking anything just for me, but I'd like some very special gifts, you see, something for Peter, something for Paul, something for the best man of them all. "For I understand that people are seeking the words long ago you were speaking when you came in another one's soul when the gifts were frankincense, and gold. "For during this season, when want becomes need, some people really do, do away with their greed, and they are the ones, the Peters and Pauls, that I would have you know, really do it all. "So Santa, help me put Christ back in Christmas, and instead of stuff in my stocking, let there be fuss in homes of the needy, for I know for myself, that the poor give plenty, they give of themselves." And Lord, if you're reading my letter to Mr. Claus, then grant me this prayer, and let all take pause, to see what they have, and to allow them to share, and in this way, they'll be richer; because they cared. ©KRJ 13 December, 1999 Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
How Lovley Sunshine.....Wonderful sentiments here my friend!  Well done!!A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you Pepper - as always my favorite cheerleader! Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Michael II Junior Member
since 1999-12-11
Posts 21Here, there, everywhere |
This is one of the best poems I`ve read yet. You might win. I wish the best to all, the best for the Christmases and the best for you. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Michael II, as long as you enjoyed it, that is the best present of all... Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
What a great work, pulling the whole meaning and age span together in such flowing verse! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A Sandgrain - I really like your pseudonym, and I'll bet it fits you!!! Thank you so much for reading this little piece, and may Joy and Peace be yours. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sunshine I applaud you! This was wonderful!!!! <*\\\>< Jesus is the reason for the season |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whtdove, thank you so much. Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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PhaerieChild Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787Aloha, Oregon |
Sunshine, I really enjoyed this. A letter disguised as a prayer or vice versa. I love it. Happy Holidays to you and yours.  Poetry~ Words falling on paper, painting a dream. Shawna R. Holder Boise, Idaho |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I do like the sentiments expressed in your prayer, Sunshine. Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wildchild, Elizabeth, thank you so much for your kind comments.< !signature--> Sunshine Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-17-1999).] |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Another round for this one...once again, I enjoyed it. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Elizabeth, you're so clever...I was going to bump this one up myself...just to share! Thank you for the lovely holiday lift! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wonderful......i loved this one. HURA!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A wonderful Christmas poem, expressing the meaning of Christmas, through love and compassion. JUst beautiful Liz |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Bravo!!!Beautiful sentiments. How very perfect. Thank you so much for the read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I thought I'd let you know I chose this poem for the Holiday issue of the newsletter. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
DD...thank you...it has always liked me... Elizabeth...how you have had time to come in and relax and read...you are so precious...thank you... Startime, you are more than welcome... PdV...thank you...I am glad that I had something worthwhile to contribute...I wrote this the day after a birthday...it meant something then...it means something now... Thank you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
 Of course I loved this letter you wrote to us older people's (over 21) Santa Claus. I agree that there comes a day when we outgrow childhood myths and lore to believe that there is a real God who cares and loves each one of us. This realization becomes so appearent this time of year. Thank you and God Bless You, Bob <>< |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, you have never been more radiant..... |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Yes. This is indeed the timeless prayer. Thank you for sharing. Melton |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Another treasure unearthed from beneath the archives..... Merry Christmas!!!! Bridgette |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I never got back to thank you all... and here it is, nearly Christmas, 2004! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sunshine, indeed this is a sweet read and one that deserves to be brought up again from our archives! Thanx for writing this and sharing! Hugs2uPoetFriend |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very well done i love christmas i loved this poem even thought it is october of 2007 I CANT WAIT FOR THE HOLIDAY SEASON ARCTIC WIND |
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