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Beki
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While autumn embers
fade in December darkness
Christmas tree lights cast
colored shadows on the wall -
winter's virtual rainbow.
© Copyright 1999 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-07-1999 06:23 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

This is visual! I can see this as you described it beautifully!  
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Gorgeous....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


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A picture with words...lovely.  
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Thank you, friends  
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This is beautiful, Beki!  

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Glad you enjoyed Denise  
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Good imagery.

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8 posted 11-24-2000 04:16 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Wow, i really liked this one. Especially the last line!



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i agree with Dopey..the last line is great...
 
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