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Beki
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0 posted 1999-12-07 06:14 PM




While autumn embers
fade in December darkness
Christmas tree lights cast
colored shadows on the wall -
winter's virtual rainbow.

© Copyright 1999 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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1 posted 1999-12-07 06:23 PM


This is visual! I can see this as you described it beautifully!  

Pepper
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2 posted 1999-12-07 07:41 PM



Gorgeous....

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Nicole
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3 posted 1999-12-08 12:37 PM


A picture with words...lovely.  
Beki
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4 posted 1999-12-09 02:08 PM


Thank you, friends  
Denise
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5 posted 1999-12-11 09:18 PM


This is beautiful, Beki!  

 Denise



Beki
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6 posted 1999-12-13 12:10 PM


Glad you enjoyed Denise  
Elizabeth
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7 posted 2000-11-23 07:48 PM


Good imagery.

Elizabeth

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8 posted 2000-11-24 04:16 PM


Wow, i really liked this one. Especially the last line!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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9 posted 2000-11-28 11:56 AM


i agree with Dopey..the last line is great...
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