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Lucie
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0 posted 12-07-1999 12:51 AM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lucie

I built a snowman in the yard.
It took a while, but it wasn't hard.
I put a hat on his snow bald head.
A pipe in his mouth and called him Ed.
He stayed all night till just after dawn.
The sun came out, and poor Ed was gone.


 Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul.

© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-07-1999 01:13 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Lucie! This is so cute! I laughed and laughed! Poor old Ed!  
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2 posted 12-07-1999 07:47 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

LOL....Loved this piece!  


 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


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3 posted 12-07-1999 09:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Hillarious! This is great Lucie!  

 Denise


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4 posted 12-08-1999 12:34 AM       View Profile for Nicole   Email Nicole   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nicole

Awww...poor Ed!     This is cute, thanks for the  

 May I never be too busy to help another's load,
Then I'll be drinking from the saucer 'cause my cup has overflowed.

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5 posted 11-04-2000 02:39 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

LOL, cute! No snow yet, but that will be coming soon enough.

Elizabeth


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
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6 posted 11-04-2000 02:54 PM       View Profile for Dopey Dope   Email Dopey Dope   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dopey Dope

Hahaha hey this was great!!!! I loved it!!!




"I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust."

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!
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7 posted 11-04-2000 05:52 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Lucie~
Cute little piece  
Poor ED  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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8 posted 11-04-2000 06:22 PM       View Profile for Lakewalker   Email Lakewalker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lakewalker

hehe, I love it, great job

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!
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9 posted 11-04-2000 08:55 PM       View Profile for CocoBaci   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CocoBaci

Lucie, to tell ya the truth this happened to me last year we had a snow fall in morn by 1:00pm sun came out warmed things up and like you said in rhyme lil ole Ed tumbled to the ground...

I liked your poem and Oh how I miss the snow!
  Coco



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Lucie
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10 posted 11-11-2000 04:57 PM       View Profile for Lucie   Email Lucie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lucie

When I pulled up my E-mail and saw the notifications from Netpoets I was a little surprised.. I haven't written a poem in so long I sometimes think all the poems I did churn out where a figment of my imagination, but then isn't that where all poems come from.   Thank you all for your comments on this piece. And thanks for making an old poet feel special about something she wrote.

Lucie
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11 posted 12-06-2008 12:26 PM       View Profile for Flutterbutt   Email Flutterbutt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Flutterbutt

Hey mom!! You know I always liked this poem! =) I hope i'll be as good as you...
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