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Radrook
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0 posted 10-03-2002 03:23 AM       View Profile for Radrook   Email Radrook   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Radrook


God my Lord and Savior,
Take pity upon me.
Forgive please my behavior.
I repent sincerely.

I will no more offend you
With sinful ways I lived.
I speak to you
what is now true.
I ask you to forgive.

No more will I be stealing
Or getting into strife.
No more will I be feeling
That I am not alive.

Because of your forgiveness
I will be finally free
With the hopes of being sinless.
Oh Lord please pity me!


[This message has been edited by Radrook (10-03-2002 03:26 AM).]

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(sigh) Oh Radrook, this is so wonderfully expressed, sweet friend, He will always teach forgiveness as He loves you so much and He is even far more blessed knowing how you have understood your faults and the heart to submit is a virtue! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Radrook, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 10-04-2002 05:08 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Noah is correct in that once you realize your own misgivings that is the beginning of healing and forgiveness.  Your prayer was so nicely done and I am sure it will be answered.  God Bless.

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3 posted 10-05-2002 12:51 PM       View Profile for Lighthousebob   Email Lighthousebob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lighthousebob's Home Page   View IP for Lighthousebob

A beautiful and I felt sincere poem of turning away from the past and turning to God for the future.  God bless you my friend and continue to fill your life with His joyful presence and His love.

-Bob
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4 posted 10-06-2002 09:41 AM       View Profile for 2dalimit   Email 2dalimit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2dalimit

God will forgive you by simply asking sincerely.
Thanks for reminding me, as well.

Melton
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5 posted 10-07-2002 01:47 AM       View Profile for Radrook   Email Radrook   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Radrook

Thanks for the encouraging words.
Glad you enjoyed the poem.
God bless you all!
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6 posted 06-27-2003 12:29 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Sorry I missed this the first time around.
I love it! Though we won't be sinless until the eternity, we all fall short, but thank GOD for HIS forgivness!  It's great to know
all we have to do is sincerely ask and He is willing to forgive. Not only forgive, but wipe the slate clean for us until we once again fall short.

Very nice writing!

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Life may have influenced who we R, but we're responsible for what we become.
I don't question YOUR existance- GOD

 
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