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Redneck_13
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Man?
Lord!
Perfection incarnate
Holiness personified
Sinless without debate
A body purified.
With power to create
He humbles my pride.
He loves us without hate.
Heís Trust when Iíve lied.
The compass that keeps me straight
He sees me when I hide.
He is the direction of my fate.
He is the pusher of the tide.
Soon I will walk through that pearly gate.
And across the golden street I will stride.
No person can create the way My God can.
Let us all praise His name in one accord.


I tryed something different with the style this time. tell me what yall think.

© Copyright 2002 Benjamin Daniel Clayton II - All Rights Reserved
Miah
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1 posted 09-23-2002 08:13 PM       View Profile for Miah   Email Miah   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miah

God is wonderful.. Lovely read.

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(smiles) Oh Benjamin, this is just beautiful, I love it, yes, may we praise Him in the many wonderful names He possesses of love, God Bless You, this is wonderful, I am so glad you are posting here too, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benjamin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Keep it up Daniel, your doing great.  I'm figuring out that when ever I'm down I can read your work and it helps me get back up.  Better keep posting, I know you got more so don't even try to hold them back, I'm sure every one would love to read them.  Lovely write!!!

~*~*~Night Angel

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4 posted 09-25-2002 04:47 PM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Redneck_13;  I like the message and the style.  Good job!

Betty Lou Hebert

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This is GREAT!!! Well done.
 
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