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Redneck_13
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since 2002-09-19
Posts 8
Arkansas, USA

0 posted 2002-09-23 04:35 PM



Man?
Lord!
Perfection incarnate
Holiness personified
Sinless without debate
A body purified.
With power to create
He humbles my pride.
He loves us without hate.
He’s Trust when I’ve lied.
The compass that keeps me straight
He sees me when I hide.
He is the direction of my fate.
He is the pusher of the tide.
Soon I will walk through that pearly gate.
And across the golden street I will stride.
No person can create the way My God can.
Let us all praise His name in one accord.


I tryed something different with the style this time. tell me what yall think.


© Copyright 2002 Benjamin Daniel Clayton II - All Rights Reserved
Miah
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since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2002-09-23 08:13 PM


God is wonderful.. Lovely read.


Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2002-09-23 11:57 PM




(smiles) Oh Benjamin, this is just beautiful, I love it, yes, may we praise Him in the many wonderful names He possesses of love, God Bless You, this is wonderful, I am so glad you are posting here too, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Benjamin, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

BrokenAngel
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since 2002-01-06
Posts 141
Puryear, TN, USA
3 posted 2002-09-24 06:45 PM


Keep it up Daniel, your doing great.  I'm figuring out that when ever I'm down I can read your work and it helps me get back up.  Better keep posting, I know you got more so don't even try to hold them back, I'm sure every one would love to read them.  Lovely write!!!

~*~*~Night Angel

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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
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Idaho, USA
4 posted 2002-09-25 04:47 PM


Redneck_13;  I like the message and the style.  Good job!

Betty Lou Hebert

Tommysgirl03
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since 2002-09-21
Posts 35

5 posted 2002-09-28 11:34 PM


This is GREAT!!! Well done.
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