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Lonely Always
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since 2002-08-29
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Anchorage, AK

0 posted 2002-09-09 11:29 PM


Sorry it took me a while to do the next installment.
I could'nt get on yesterday, so I guess I'll continue right now.
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     The next morning, I awoke, having no idea where I was. A bandage was wrapped around my hand, and the room I saw was un-familiar. My friend walked in and sat by my bed. She probably thought I was still asleep, and I let her think so.
     "John, I hope you're okay. I know the pain your going through. I went through the same when my step-dad..."
     She looked up, startled, as I put my hand on hers, reassuring her that I was alright and that I would always be there for her.
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A few days later I had decided to go for a walk, and since I was staying at my friends house, I wasn't familiar with the area. I soon found myself in a part of Anchorage I had never been to before. I walked along the streets, taking each turn blindly. I finally found a house that seemed vaguely familiar. I broke down on the front porch when I realized it was my own.
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This part really doesn't have suspense, but something big happens in the next part. Hope you like this and keep reading!

Final Chapter of my life, written and the end.

© Copyright 2002 John Scott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-09-10 01:20 AM


I'll surely keep reading.  Joyce
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2 posted 2002-09-11 09:43 PM




(big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I too can't wait for the next part, you have such wonderful storytelling going on here, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-11-2002 09:56 PM).]

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