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Guardurthoughts
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0 posted 2002-08-29 12:52 PM



A hand outstretched grasped a girls heart...
A soft spoken voice lingered in her mind....
A love tantalized her very soul...

A Smile from the heavens
A kiss from the sun
A Breath from the clouds

A Girls heart falling away..
A Girls mind filled with darkness...
A Girls Love tanited with hatered...

A smile unapreciated
A kiss unwanted
A breath wasted.

A love so strong not even the deepest of pain could seperate...
A word so powerful its meaning to hard to ignore....
A Hand so Mighty the mountins crumble at his word....

A girl waiting..
A girl watching
A girl praying
....for forgiveness

~~~Gaurdurthoughts~~~

"the best and most beautiful things cannot be seen,or even touched. they must be felt with the heart"

© Copyright 2002 Erica Grover - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-30 11:31 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Erica, this is soooooo beautifully touching, sweet friend, God Bless You, may every little boy and girls prayers be answered, this is heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Erica, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-08-31 09:57 PM


And I think forgiveness will come, very nicely done indeed.

The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it.
Sharon    

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