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Annette Kimmel
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since 2002-08-03

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0 posted 2002-08-21 11:19 PM

               Refuse You Loose
                A.J.W. Kimmel
There is no possible compromise, no meeting of the mind,
No second chances, the unrepented , choked the devils twine;
Understanding fallen away, blakened hearts of stone,
The choices made your stubborness, You stand the devil's throne

God gave you warnings many times, fortelling it many ways,
Said you must prepare your self, ~These the Final Days~
You did not hear ,you did not listen, you went your merry way,
Not a care, not a worry, the terror that's underway!

Allowing dominance evil pride, greed, material wealth,
Following doctirnes, not of God, you can only blame yourself;
Sense the panic,run like hell,you have no place to hide,
You dumb poor fool ,face the carnage, You took the devil's side

            ~ Just a Choice~
   Defeat it, or allow it to defeat you
      ~ And defeat it we must! ~

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2002-08-22 01:33 AM

(big hugggssssss) Oh Annette, this is so heartbreaking and true, sadly many turn away from Him either cause they lost faith or never got to understand faith and my heart goes out to all who change like this and I pray somehow they can find penitence and forgiveness and trust in Love! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annette, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

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Riding

2 posted 2002-08-22 01:34 AM

I like the way you don't skimp on words. Very true

Thanks for sharing.

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

3 posted 2002-08-22 04:54 PM

Annette: Very impressive and dramatic!

Betty Lou Hebert

miriam
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since 1999-08-26

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glendale,ca.

4 posted 2002-08-22 07:30 PM

I like it!! thank you for sharing.

miriam coronado

Marge Tindal

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5 posted 2002-08-24 04:50 PM

Annette~
Very poignantly strong read~
Thank you for being in our circle~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Annette Kimmel
Junior Member

since 2002-08-03

Posts 31

6 posted 2002-08-26 12:15 PM

Thank you dear friend

Your lovely words of constructive critisim means a lot coming from such a great poetess as yourself

Hugzz and may God bless you my poetic sister
Annette

Annette Kimmel
Junior Member

since 2002-08-03

Posts 31

7 posted 2002-08-26 12:22 PM

My posting was an error

LOL I forgot to put you name in Marge, and again I thank you , and all my other poetic sisters and brothers for you wonderful words of incouragement, and/or constructive critisim. Thank you all and God bless you all

Hugzz and Love
Annette

Annette Kimmel
Junior Member

since 2002-08-03

Posts 31

8 posted 2002-08-26 12:30 PM

Thank you Marge, Trillium. Skyfire, and Mistletoe Angel , I am new at this so bare with me lOL I promise to get it right yet,I meant to mention your names and forgot to before posting OOPS!

God Bless and thanks for your understanding

Hgzz and love Annette

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