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Annette Kimmel
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0 posted 2002-08-21 11:12 PM




                  I Will
                A.J.W.kimmel

I will hear, see,listen, sense,smell,,and touch,
I will feel,experience imagine and stand in the face of helplessness...
I will know,hatred, panic,loss and weeping~
But I will not give up the fight!
I will remember~~
I'll experience loneliness, fear and despair,
terror,and persecution,
and yes beheading...
More importantly , I am prepared~
Jesus is all I need you see...
He has me in His care!

Ill be singing, my Fathers'praises~
To God I charge my care!  
     Ha, ha, ah,
And spit up on your evil face-
Yes, You Satan....
My choice to choose~
" You snooze, You loose!"

      

© Copyright 2002 Annette Kimmel - All Rights Reserved
Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2002-08-22 01:29 AM




(giggles) Oh my gosh, I just love your catchy ending, it sounded Xena: Warrior Princess-like! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, may Love always prevail and guide you with great joy, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annette, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-08-22 01:38 AM


I love it, especially the ending!
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3 posted 2002-08-22 02:50 AM


Great and like Noah - loved the ending!

The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it.
Sharon    

Annette Kimmel
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4 posted 2002-08-26 12:56 PM


Hi all my dear poetic comrads~
I am humbled by all your wonerful comments and thank you ever so much! and because I am so honered to be a part of this wonderful group of such worderful poets,and poetess, and most importantly such a wonderful family of friends on a poetic realm! You have all made me feel so welcomed and I hope to live up to my end LOL
I am glad you liked the ending Mysteria, and never even looked at iit as being Noah like. That is indeed a true honor and compliment to me. Thank you and God bless you.
Skyfeir I am glad you too enjoyed the ending , and I thank you, God bless you
Noah( Mistletoe Angel) thank you so very much for you wonderful comments.I am glad you found my ending catchy, and Xena like , Wow! That too is a great compliment!Hugzz and love God bless you.
God bless you all!
Annette

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