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God, where are you?

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Skyfire
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0 posted 08-20-2002 02:05 AM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Skyfire


God, where are you?
Right here.
Why does it hurt?
To make you stronger.
Will it last forever?
No.
Do you love me?
More than anything else.
Why?
Because youíre my daughter.
But why?
Because I created you.
Are you really here?
Right beside you.
And youíll never leave me, right?
Never. I made that promise, and I will keep it.
When will it stop hurting?
When itís time.
Will I find true love?
You know you will.
Is it okay to cry?
I catch every tear that falls from your eyes.
How do I say thank you?
By loving me and drawing close to me.
I love you...
I love you too, my child.
© Copyright 2002 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 08-20-2002 02:21 AM       View Profile for PoetryIsLife   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoetryIsLife

Very splendidly done.

Very real, personal... meek, childlike. Hungry, yearning, yet scared, scared to trust, scared to not trust. Faith. Even in the hard times.

Sincerely,
Titus

"I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come."
            -Abraham Lincoln

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2 posted 08-20-2002 03:01 AM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

Well those answers were all that I expected them to be - nicely done!

The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it.
Sharon    

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(smiles) Oh Rhonda, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it, yes, He loves you and will never make promises He can't keep as joy is bound to fill your heart! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rhonda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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4 posted 08-20-2002 05:24 AM       View Profile for Paul Wilson   Email Paul Wilson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Paul Wilson

Skyfire... A wonderful conversation between you and God. I enjoyed listening in very much
Please never stop talking to God, his phone line is never busy, dial it anytime...Paul
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5 posted 08-20-2002 11:20 AM       View Profile for Joyce Johnson   Email Joyce Johnson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Joyce Johnson

You describe a very tender and personal moment with God.  He is always there for you.  Joyce
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6 posted 08-21-2002 01:31 PM       View Profile for miriam   Email miriam   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for miriam

Haven't we all done that, we run to the Lord with our broken hearts. This is a beautiful poem, and yes the Lord is there with you always. He's in every breath you take and in every morning.

miriam coronado


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7 posted 08-21-2002 08:01 PM       View Profile for GOlDsparklESS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GOlDsparklESS

awww... sweet.
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8 posted 08-22-2002 04:55 PM       View Profile for Trillium   Email Trillium   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Trillium

Skyfire:  Isn't it wonderful when we ask questions and get loving answers?

Betty Lou Hebert

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9 posted 08-23-2002 01:10 AM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

Thank you all of you! I don't really have anything constructive or explanitory to say to this, other than I wrote this while I was in a moment of missing my ex. I don't know why I didn't write it before now, because I've already gone back to this one a few times, and it's helped me out. Thank you for all your warm replies
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10 posted 08-24-2002 02:43 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

WOW!!!
This is so incredibly beautiful and inspiring, well done on a most delightful and touching poem.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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11 posted 08-24-2002 05:45 AM       View Profile for punkrockerrobin   Email punkrockerrobin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit punkrockerrobin's Home Page   View IP for punkrockerrobin

wow sis i'm so proud of you!! here look this psalm up 91:11 keep it close to your heart and remeber sis i am always here for you.

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

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12 posted 08-24-2002 07:13 PM       View Profile for NewEnglandlazurlu   Email NewEnglandlazurlu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for NewEnglandlazurlu

Some days it feels like God is in the Bahamas enjoying a much needed vacation.

However, thankfully, He is right beside us 24/7 and loves us.

Nice poem, I enjoyed it very much.

Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns,
I still embrace it, for I know
that in between those thorns,
there is a rose worth all the pain."

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13 posted 02-24-2004 10:23 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Glad I came across this one as I just read it to my daughter who badly needed to hear this.  I will print this one out and hang it upon my fridg.   God bless

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Life may have influenced who we R, but we're responsible for what we become.
I don't question YOUR existance- GOD

 
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