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Dustin462
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since 2002-08-09
Posts 23
Selah, WA

0 posted 2002-08-19 01:39 PM


This is more of a song than a poem.  They are alternate lyrics for a song by Korn, Thoughtless, I've been looking for something to make this fit and  finnaly did last night.  
I fall down the pit into Hell
I notice that my wings are gone, gone, gone
I look around into the emptiness
So I start to walk around, round, round

Chorus:
I’m an angel trapped in Hell
Burning up right now
Please God save me
I don’t know what to do right now
I need your help
I need my savior

I walk around over to the devil
Staring at the devil in his eyes, eyes, eyes
I try to talk things over with him
But his heart is made of stone, stone, stone

ChorusX1

My friends are away for good
Unless you save me

ChorusX2


© Copyright 2002 Dustin A. T. - All Rights Reserved
Dulcinea
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since 2001-07-22
Posts 774
IN
1 posted 2002-08-19 09:45 PM


Very powerfully written Dustin, I agree, the Devil is not a nice fellow and assuredly has a heart of utter stone! Well done!
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
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Posts 9912
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2 posted 2002-08-20 11:02 AM


Ooh my.  Sounds like a very bad deam.  Joyce
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